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:claps: very nice. updated too fast for me to notice, way to go! i don't mind. go bakura!

Hi, you've managed to update this very very fast for you so that is pretty awsome. Sorry I didn't get to review on the last chapter but life has been...well lets just say life hasn't been good enough recently to allow me time to come on here as frequently as I'd like and enjoy things such as this fic.

I like the plot advancements on all of the Bakura/Seto Ryou/Dartz situations. The whole scene with Dartz was truely amazing, totally threw me. Poor Ryou he was just trying to help Dartz but for obvious reasons (now) Dartz is very very wary of neko's and their powers. There was so serious wheeling and dealing going on between Bakura and Seto which intrigues me as I honestly cannot figure out what Bakura will ultimatly do.

Will there be a lemon next chapter...personally that isn't my main thought I would really kind of like to see a little more of the development between Marik and Yugi and their feelings before things become more serious. Oh well either way it is your story and plot advancements etc are at your whim.

My fave moment was when Noa was trying to get into Ryou's mind and coudn't manage it. I felt so sorry for the poor kid and I just wanted to hug him to make all of his pain go away, everyone needs a hug at some point.

To a certain extent just ignore the Anon reviewer, even though it is nice to know someone is appreciating your work, it is you work and therefore subject to what you think is best.

I would appreciate being added to you emailing list thingy, firstly so that I know when you update and secondly I really would love to know what would have happened in 'Velvet' a very very brief outline is fine as I know you are busy. My email is Kittenbelle@hotmail.com

Velvetina

Ooh! Nice twist with Dartz there ;) I think I have a pretty good idea what's happened... but I guess I could easily be wrong :P

I personally LOVE the Velvet story, and i don't think you're writing badly at all... I get anonymous reviews like that all the time (on artwork, but nonetheless...) The best you can do is continue, and show them that they've had no influence on your writings whatsoever. :)

Good luck!

Ryou's powers are getting more and more interesting. And it sounds like Bakura is starting to go into heat soon.

I'd like to be on your mailing list if I may (wicabeth@hotmail.com)

Sorry if this is disjointed, been up for 22 hours and on planes all day.

Keep up the good work T_T but i'd like to see more ACTION if yea' get what I'm sayin' lol but yea' I like the fact that Noa is being a bit more social and stuff and I can't wait to see Ryou and Bakura's next attempt ^^

:jumps up and down: i'm excited about this story. bakura and ryou (and thier older brother ^_^) are my favorite characters, and i like how you portray them! can't wait to read more, and looking anxiously for some bakura and ryou!

eep! Can't wait for the next chapter. Whatever's goin on with Ryou and Bakura and Seto and Dartz.... what EVER it is... is the most fascinating part of this fic. Can't wait to find out more! Glad you updated again. PLEASE don't take so long next time? Though I know it's the busy part of the year with the holidays and finals in school an' all... whatever... Update when you can! I'll be waiting!!!

Yay! I was happy to see an update *^-^* I'm still itching to see what Marik is plotting with Yugi and how things are going to work out with.. well, everyone.

I may just have to do some fanart *^-^* .. Gives me an excuse to fill up my school sketchbook c.c;;

Yay you are actually alive *dances* I have missed you so much. I loved the chapter, I thought the development of Yugi's powers was cool not to mention the growing affection an Mariks part to the chibi. I just cannot wait to see where you go with that. I know this is shorter than my old reviews but I am just a bit busy at this second but when

OO I am reviewing you...I don't believe it...I would have done this ages ago but I remembered something about you not wanting annonymous reviews. I have so much to tell you on your work so I'll sum it up...YOU ARE THE GREATEST AUTHORESS EVER!!!!!! I've read nearly all of your fics and I've never had a 'bored' session in them (a time where I'm not so interesed in reading more of the fic after some big event happens that's really exciting.) You always keep me interested in the fic, always something happening, but you don't overdose on the bad events like some people do (it's one bad thing after another for one couple.) You are like Ra of all my favorite writers, even if you just do fan fic. My little brother also likes you're writing. He read 'Summer Time Magic' (with me trying to keep him off the adult parts [he read some though, he's reading FAKE and will be starting Gravitation so, well, I only had to explain a few things -.-;]) and really liked it (my little sister [baby of the family] has no idea what we could possibly find funny about an alarm clock. ^.^) Anyway, I know you're busy and all so it's hard to update (I can relate), but do you think you could update 'Like Crushed Velvet' and the 'Kimi ga Iru' world? I'm particularly dying to see what happens with Seto, Ryou, Bakura, and Dartz. That's all for now. ^.^