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Bleh, I'm not trying to prove anything and I don't recall telling you anything about yourself. I just had a complaint which you hugely overreacted to.

I adore this story and I hope those few negative comments out there down get you down.

:)

*cuddles little Yugi* That's pretty kinky though that Marik cleans him up now. Rarr.

But, oh ho ho.. Yami is going to drop a litter when he finds out what happened =O

W00t! Statutory rape scene with Yugi and Marik!!! More smut with charas from a kid show!!!!
lol, Sorry that just cracked me up! Good Shit, good Shit!

A lovely set of new chapters for my fav fic (besides the Ryou/Jou oneshot, of course)! It's makes me all swqueally inside. I'm sorry that you won't be continuing "like Crushed Velvet" though! I really liked that one, and it was just starting to get really good! Ah, cute little Ryou with the kitty plusie and playing hard to get!!! So 'dorable!

Speaking of 'dorable Ryou, he's extra cuddly in these last few chapter too! I loved when he was playing chase with Dartz. Oh, and I completely lost it laughing when Seto was hitting on Bakura. It seems EVERYONE is in heat, ne? I could totally see the Dartz-neko thing coming though. I' curious as to how he's been hiding it to the point where he even smells like a human. Ryou "warp reality" power could change Dartz into a 'real' human, like how he changed Kisara, couldn't he? God, Dartz is filled with a Hitler-esque hate for himself!!! Beware Ryou, nothing but pain awaits you this guy!!! Wow, I'm babbling! I was wondering what was going on with Jou and the rest of the characters too, I'm glad we got to do a quick peek!

Beautiful stuff, as usual! Love the writing and the complex plots, I hope you do some more Kimi ga Iru soon too. Ugh... I really wish you'd do more "Velvet" too, but I know how set backs can ruin it for you. I quit a fic that was popular (for me....) because of writers block. 2 yrs later, I started posting a comic version on my site 'cause I felt so bad. And I can't write... heh. Yeah, at least you let people know... I just went lurker instead.

Anyway! Love the fics!
-Hikaru

ps If you ever want fanart, just request!!! I'll be happy to oblige!

Oh dear, is the Anon reviewer still on your case? I feel kinda bad that something I asked for is now causing you so much hassle, however how pathetic are they? Geez. Not that I'm not saying it isn't a pity that you don't have the inspiration for the fic any more because you know I think it is and obviously it was a tad shocking. However I don't need to go on about it when its really not your fault about what happens and if I can accept this with good grace why can't they. Honestly some people! And to even think of stopping properly reviewing this just because of that is absolutally ridiclous. Argh, sorry got a little steamed on your behalf there.

This chapter was short but sweet....well techinically not very sweet but I loved it all the same. But I so cannot believe that Marik did that to Yugi! Bad Golden kitty. And poor Yugi doesn't really understand whats going on does he? I know last chapter Yugi said the he understood what rutting was but I don't think he really gets that you can get so much more from the whole thing. And darn Marik for not explaining better and taking his time with the little kitten. After all Yugi was a virgin. And then after all that Marik went and did it again, even if he did help Yugi afterwards this time he was a very bad cat. *glares* and just as I was starting to like you Marik. Lol joke. Still my fave moment was when Yugi went for his bath and we read the little bit where he was all upset and the he started to cry. I know I normally latch onto the humerous side of things but I guess we all need a little angst now and then.


I did have to laugh at the Bakura and Ryou scene though. Just the whole "Did you steal anything?" "Was I mean to?" Just cracked me up. I could almost see Ryous eyes wide with confusing and Bakura slapping his forehed thinking 'why me?!' LOL. Ah those two are just so sweet.

*blinks* Oh a one shot, pour moi? Sorry if you've said that somewhere before. I'm kind of bedridden at the minute and you spend long enough laying here bored out of your mind your mind tends to glaze over and you forget things. Urm...well I have to admit I have a sudden longing to read a Dartz/Yugi fic, I was gunning for them. But in the Kimi ga Iru universe I'd be happy with a Marik/Yugu after the angst we had here. Lol so I give you two options. Whichever you get inspiration for is fine by me cos I know that is often the hardest part. I love the sounds of the fic that you mentioned. It sounds very very interesting and I am gonna keep my eyes open for that one!!!

Just to let ya know...LOVE IT!!!!

Velvetina

:blink: hope i haven't been rude in any way...hmm....:shrug: i have a question...it might be a stupid question that you explained already and i haven't caught it...but...what's Bakura's power?

wow that was a very fast update.

My fave bit was the whole "Your gun is poking me" "I don't carry a gun" bit, far too funny to be true *dies laughing* I loved the tension between Bakura and Seto. I think that there can't be anything better than comin on here and reading about those two sexy bishies at each others throats, their relationship is pretty much on my top list of faves. At leat the way you write it, others make a complete mess of that pairing.

Woot Yugi craved cheesecake. I love cheese cake. I love to make it almost as much as I love to eat it. So go Yugi when it comes to his taste in food. Hell when it comes to his taste in men too. Seriously I don't think I could have resisted Marik for as long as he did, but maybe thats Yugi's prolonged childlike nature coming into play. Such a little innocent. Totally my second fave pair.

Aww poor Dartz. He's all confused and forgot even to ge Ryou's name. However we know they are gonna meet agains, after all what universe is this in...lol! Bless him though that little game of tag was so adorable not to mention I cracked up when he thought about having to learn to control the tail. Hehe there could be all sorts of tail related accidents.

Yay one shots heading our way. I love your one shots!

Velvetina

Ooo i have a name for ryou's power Dynamus[Die-Nam-us].

oh and i'm really glad you updated when you did my internet will be cut off tomorrow because i'm switching servers. Yay coinkidinks! and yay you for another riveting chapter!

until next time
~Kree

*blushes* Aw, shucks! Glad you liked my story so much XD

But, eeeeee, I'm dying to see what's up with Dartz. Since he's got such a problem with the EFCs, could it be because he's ashamed of himself? Obviously something has to do with him!

And eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, the hentai in me is cheering for a lemon, but I have to worry if poor little Yugi is going to be up to it. Marik is doing what he originally did to Malik all over again, but we've seen that wasn't exactly for the better. And with Yugi being so young and naive as he is, what will something like that do to him?

*waits on pins and needles*

*pants* Jeez, I came back a little later and see that there was another chapter! Well, forgive me for reviewing twice in a row *^-^*

But, you are an EVIL, EVIL tease for stopping there! I must know what happens! *squirms anxiously*