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for A Home of Our Own

by Kugatsu

person Black Ice
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
BI: I saw Sailor Moon and Wolf's Rain (I think.) Although I think someone already said it. I wanted a Seto and Marik one-shot. Oh well...
Muse: At least you won that DVD on First Night
BI: Oh yeah! You had to say the name of Tofu's (forget her real name) new school. The people there obviously didn't know Japanese, there were names like "wanagi" when it was really "Kisaragi Girls School." Really people, it's not that hard.
person ShadowofLight
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ROFLAO omg dartz! he's a neko (or an inu?)! ooh to see him actually chase his tail like that in real life! ooh I can picture it and jsut laughed. poor honda... i mean geez jou has a home, the guys need homes... well and honda doesn't get enough of the limelight in ff. i wonder what'll happen and if he'll like his new home but i could also picture him pulling at hte leash. like that shepard that was gonna get fixed in Dr. Dolittle ^^
person Wicabeth
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If Honda is going to be Pegasus' new pet, there better be plenty of newspapers on the ground XDD

*giggles madly at the last part* That just cracked me up XD
person YAY!
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! You updated! I was waiting! YAY!! ::Happy Dance::
person sirithiliel
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice chapter. peach juice is good! another story? Great! looking foward to it! wish you luck!
person Velvetina
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE DARTZ...*GLOMP* love him love him love him!!!!...eh sorry about that but the way you write him its just to darn cute to resist. I now want a Dartz of my own and I was never too fond of him until I started reading your work, you've corrupted me and I'm liking it. hehe

So as you may have gathered the Dartz bits were my fave throughout this chapter. Especially the last one...go tail you rock. Mwaha Dartz will never get it, although I do have this cat and his tail is so long that he can actually catch it every now and then and he nips it accidently and lets out the cutest little mewl...bless. I'm sure you didn't want to know that.

Ooh we have Peggy and Raphy back in the picture. Peggy's adopted Honda?? Wow didn't see that one coming, *giggle* even better the return of Peggy's spray bottle. It amused me no end when he kept spraying Honda and Honda was just like 'WTF'?? Brilliant I'm sure those Raphy and Peggy will have fun training up the new inu pup.

Poor Noa, he is just one of the sweetest things in this story. I just wanna huggle him and tell him it will work out for the best. Also I almost died laughing when Seto was having 'obscene' thoughts about Bakura, very small bit of the chapter but it really jumped out for me.

Thanks for an awesome chappie...by the way are you sure I can't have a Dartz of my own...no?...well shucks. LOL

Love it
Velvetina xx
person BlacKat
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
0.- sorry i didn't review the other chappies -.- time goes by fast yet i go slow compared to it XD lol great chappies really though what shocked me was what happened to Dartz 0.0 what's up with him!?!? well i'm guessing he's a Neko too or is he like a werewolf that only transforms at one point 0.0 curious~ ^^ Well yea' can't wait for the next chapter to find out if you put a scene of him in there.
person ryou'sgirl
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like this and hope u update soon :333

alot of stuff happened in this that i didn't expect. it started as oneshots then turned into another story then switched into another. did you think of that and/or just change your mind while writting it? i like bakura and seto alot, and malik and otogi. they are cute. i like them all except for yugi. he's way to mean to yami, yami tries hard to take care of him and yugi's just a spoiled brat. grr. he deserves to be statuary raped by marik. grr.
person Velvetina
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Anon 2005-12-20 id # 2035548213
Bleh, I'm not trying to prove anything and I don't recall telling you anything about yourself. I just had a complaint which you hugely overreacted to

Sorry to butt In Schwarzwald but I came on here to check that this person wasn't bothering you any more but apparently they are and they've pissed me off enough at their constant swiping at you that I just have to say something even if they don't bother to read it!


Ok right. I am so fed up with you coming on here and hassiling this author. They made a decision that was best for them, get over it. As for the whole you telling them about themself I do believe that you said something along the lines of "You're just pouting cos something didn't go your way" I know you didn't exactly say it like that but that was basically it. If that ain't trying to tell someone about theirselves and their actions, which in all honesty you have no clue about, I don't know what is. And as for your overreacting comment, I personally too would "overreact" as you put it if someone said that to me, although I guess that means its not really overreacting if any other self respecting author would feel the same way. And then you have the nerve to keep complaining and not even bother reviewing this wonderful peice of fiction that is continuing. Have you completly managed to overlook the well written complex plotlines and the well developed characters or are you naturally that stupid?

Once again sorry Schwarz, feel free to delete this if you want but I got pretty pissed off at them and just had to say something because its not fair on you!

Velvetina xx
person hikari light
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is good but it takes a lot of left turns and gets kinda confusing. Like, why did Yami suddenly abandon Yugi and leave him to live alone just when he'd found out that Yugi is permanently stuck as a kitten? After how protective he'd been for so long it seem strange. Bakura and Seto are fun, though I'm a little confused about Dartz too. What made him suddenly turn into a cat? I don't get it... though I did like him and Ryou playing around. Haha. Also your A/n's are kinda long... I thought it was a long chapter only to find I had to scroll through a whole bunch of notes. Just something you might wanna think about. Anyway keep writing and i hope you can answer my questions.