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for A Home of Our Own

by Kugatsu

person Wicabeth
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*giggles madly* Poor Seto is going to have some nosebleeds if he doesn't watch himself XD
person Wicabeth
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*cuddles little Yugi* Stupid people at school. School sucked ass. And who cares if you have little kid stuff? =P Shit, I dressed up in a Superman shirt and cape for my birthday when I was a freshman XD .. (*cough* I'm 23 and I still take a YGO backpack to college!)

I'm getting curious to see how it turns out with Honda. And with Ryou going to start training.


*laughs!* The end part with Marik cheering Yugi up was cute XD
person Velvetina
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww poor Yugi *glomps kitten* I'll have him and look after him and cuddle him and make sure he's happy...*looks at Marik and slowly backs away from Yugi* then again maybe I'll just leave it to Marik lol. Seriously Yugi so reminds me of a friend I used to have who had a mental disorder which left her mental age far younger than ours and evryone used to be mean for her and I used to feel so sorry for her.

Argh not much time to write I am meant to be revising, agh stupid exams. Untill next time xx
person hatochiisai
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I go away for a month and you go to town with the posting! I LOVE what's going on with Ryou and Bakura, and Bakura wanting to educate Ryou. Can't wait to see how this deal with Seto works out. And I am intrigued by what's going on with Dartz. O.O I'm also glad to see Jou settling down in a home.... but other than that... well... I can't say I'm too thrilled with the other things goin on. While I have seen the Malik/Otogi pairing, I can't help but wish Malik was with Marik... and as for Yugi... well... I have to admit that I just skip over the parts involving him now... I'm doing this for two reasons. 1) I cannot stand the Marik/Yugi pairing. At all. and 2) Yugi just grates on my nerves too much. He acts like a 6 year old who's been spoiled rotten to the point that he's beyond all hope and I just can't stand him... and Yami's being a major ass, too. But I adore how you are portraying Ryou and Bakura. Their personalities are so different and charsimatic, it really draws me in. They are the characters that keep bringing me back to this fic, I just love them. ^_^ hope to see an update soon!!
person sirithiliel
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay! bakura and ryou go to kaiba's! can't wait for more, love the way you write!
person Luna
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
somebodys been watching fushigi yuugi ne? XDDD
person Black Ice
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
BI: The magical liquor store!!! >< Too funny, makes up for all the problems Yugi's been having as of late. Poor baby, forget the brat thing. *huggles* And poor Honda, Peg-chan's being such an ass! Oh, yeah, about Tatsuki and Hotohori, wouldn't they be Marik's age or older? I mean, Hotohori's definately older than Yugi and I think Tatsuki would at least be in a higher grade. ...But I love the chow mix thing! >< So cute!!!! And Jin!! OO It took be awile to figure out who it was 'cause I was still thinking Fushigi Yugi, but then I thought: 'Jin...samurai...Samurai Champloo...as a Neko...' The laughter that endured... He's the last person I would have imagined as a Neko...cuuuute!
Muse: *whispers* The pairing!
BI: OO That's right! *lots of sparkly stuff pops out of nowhere* ^^ I'd love a Seto and Marik coupling, they've been on my mind since "Like Crushed Velvet." By the way, what happened to Noa and Mokuba? They went poof on us. Shizuka too...and Otogi... *drifts off with Seto and Marik thoughts*
Muse: -_- ...Now I've got to bring her back to Earth...
person Aino Hikaru!
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wah!! I got them all this time!!! YuYu Hakusho, Prince of Tennis, and Fruits Baskets! ... At least I think that's all of them... lol!

Poor little Yugi, though he is being a brat (BIG TIME)! Marik is practically raping the boy, and no one pays enough attention to him anymore to see what's really going on with him. I mean, How can he ever learn to grow up if he isn't taught properly in the first place? GRR! It makes me so mad! Everyone is just acting like Grandpa and letting him stay the way he is! You can't ignore bad behavior, it has to be corrected!! Sorry, I have lots of younger sibs, raising kids has replaced my free time!

Bakura's finally starting to understand as well. I felt like he was really trying to push Ryou into wanting to go to school, by the way he was describing it and why other kittens go to school. Ryou's too co-dependant to make a desicion like that on his own though. I'm surprised that he actually want outside... but he's always been too curious for his own good! I repeat, Ryou, stay away from Dartz, he's no good for you!!! (sorry *grin* Jou/Ryou lover!)

And have I mentioned that I want to smack Yami, 'cause I do! I really really do!

Fabulous as always!
person Quichi
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love how you keep mixing in little bits from other series! Are the other Sohmas around somewhere too? And SM's Luna! I loved it! Thenk you for updating so much
person Velvetina
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*GLOMP* Mwahahaha I've got you now and I am never going to let you go. Love you so much :D Lol yes Marik/Yugi I lurve Marik Yugi although I did say a Dartz/Yugi if ya wanted to get away from this Universe for a while. Totally up to you my dear.

References?? Nope no idea, still lol. I'm guessing it has smething to do with the 'Kitty Benuto' (I have no idea what that is sorry), and the inu's at school but hey I know nothing!!

Yuck, I hate orange lol.

I feel so sorry for yugi. *squeeze* stop being mean to Yugi, poor ickle kitten. I loved the school scene though, espesh when they were talking about the bowls and having bones on it even though they were neko. I giggled so much lol.

Oh myGAWD. Bakura has actually gone to Seto?? Wow!! oh now they'll have to spend time together and fall in love and do lots of dirty stuff together and you'll hear me cheering in the background *chibi grin* Happiness!!!

Awww Yami really seems to care for Amelda but he's neglecting Yugi a little. However he's in love (even if he don't know it yet) so he can be excused for now...but if it goes on too long I'll have to have my knive have a chat with him...not really I wouldn't wanna hurt his pretty face.

Eeek sorry about the random review I have had far far too much coffee. Love it!

Vel