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for A Home of Our Own

by Kugatsu

person person
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooh, cool. Muwahahahahahahaha. *insert evil smirk here* I like that chapter, a LOT. It kicked ass. Keep them coming.
person Wicabeth
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor little Malik *hugs* And what's going to happen if/when they catch Ryou? And what about Yugi and Yami? What's going to happen with Bakura? I have so many questions and I have a bad cold. *coughs hard*
person Velvetina
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww poor Jou and Varon...theres such...animal magnatism! Lol my idea of a bad joke. Infact most of my jokes are bad. Oh and watsup with Noa that neko gets seriously spooked easily although I do think you mentioned the poor kid didn't have the best of starts in life...poor little bugger. I loved loved loved loved the 'Bakura says hello' line i just couldn't stop laughing, I don't know why but it really got to me espesh the way I imagined grandpas face (my bad spelling strikes again cos I can't spell the old dudes name!)

All in all once again an awsome chappie LOVE IT!

Velvetina xx
person kaiba\'sgurrl
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love all your stories! you're so creative! Please, please keep updating this neko fic! It's so cute! And I like your new story, too, the Seto/Marik one. One pairing I really love that I hardly ever see is Bakura/Yugi. Do you think you could put them in somewhere? You don't have to just for me, but I'd like to see what you do with them. Don't ever stop writing!
person Velvetina
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yo I've finally caught up with everything. You have been one busy person dude!!! I've loved everything that you've done and you have had no idea just how much i've missed reading your work while I've been away. Coming on here to read your stuff always brightens up my day so I'm so happy to be home. Even though I'm exhusted right now.

I love where you're going with this story, there have been some major twist and I love it so much. I mean woah Marik and Malik kidnapping Yugi and Grandpa being one of the 'bad-guys' and I wonder whats gonna happen when the Albinos raid the Kaiba mansion, why do I get the feeling Dartz will suddenly start to get warm and cuddley feelings for nekos...or should I say A neko *giggle* and I'm totally looking foward to the upcoming Bakura/Seto scene which is gonna happen. Hmm I see what you mean about Isis being out of the 'loop' thing, maybe you could pair her up with Shizuka? I've never seen that one done before may be a change but really its up to you oh genious one. My fave parts I'll admit so far are the Marik/Yugi theres just so much chemistry between the pair of them when you write it, it really is awsome.

Ok I feel very very very...VERY greedy asking when you always write such awsome stuff that I love but would you consider writing a Marik/Seto one shot? *smiles shiftily* Its just that I've never seen that pairing and well I become more enamoured of Marik everytime i read one of your fics and Seto my fave... ah I'm probably being greedy but if you don't ask you don't get so I'm asking.

Anyways as ever LOVE IT!
Velvetina xx
person BlacKat
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally! LIME! T_T So close to a lemon though at the end! Although thanks for the LIME! 2 pairings down more to go...^^ I shall give a longer review for you when the next chappie is up...-__-and when I'm sober...UPdate as soon as you can! ^_^ Ja ne!
person Wicabeth
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Yugi! He's still locked up =(

Marik is going to be pissed that Malik found someone new. *snerk*

And poor puppies, they didn't get to finish humping. Maybe they're starting to become better friends now, eh? *chuckles*
person person
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
W00t, conspiracy theory. Nothing like a good conspiracy. *nods* Great chapter! As for doing Mokie Noa stuff in this fic, I reckon you should.
person BlacKat
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sahhh ne...MORE DRAMA has been put into the story...XD and i LOVE it!

Poor Yugi AND Yami! Hope the make it out ok...or atleast they make the right choice! AND BAD Malik and Marik!...Ahhhh!...Don't kill me! :runs up a tree: hssss...
LOL! VARON'S IN HEAT! VARON'S IN HEAT!...?...:coughcough: well anyways hopefully it will speed up the pace between Jou and Varon :coughLIME/LEMONcoughPLScoughcough: ^_^
...? Are Bakura and Ryou really going to go through with it? T_T I give them my best wishes!
PPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! I can't go on any longer with out seeing any action...well I started twitching when Varon "attacked" Jou...XP

Well anyways UPdate soon as you can!^^
person Wicabeth
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!! Is Sugoroku a bad guy?? Were Malik and Marik really just fooling Yugi? What are they going to do to Yami? What's in that file?? Is Ryou turning evil? DAH!!! I have so many questions!!! ;.; I must keep reading!! *claws at screen pitifully*