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oh i loved the ryou cooking section! bloody brilliant! amusing, and seto's going to start questioning his sanity later on! can't wait for the part two!

I know I've said it before, but Ryou is STILL too damn cute for his own good.

*cuddles Yugi* I just hope things go well for him.

Hmm... Bakura, Seto and Ryou are my favorites. By... a lot. Yugi - he's cute and all, but he's incredibly frustrating because he's immature and wilfully dense. I know he's stuck as a kitten forever but there are a lot of ways that he could improve himself but just doesn't; such as how rude he is to everyone who tries to take care of him, especially Yami, and his unending determination to believe (or at least pretend like he believes) that his Grandpa is at "camp." His character is something I'm hoping you address in the second part of this saga; I think Marik could be a good influence on him, as far as that's concerned. I mean, Marik's not going to teach him to be *polite*, lol, but he can help Yugi grow up and use that big brain of his since he's obviously not dumb if he can do calculus. ^^

Ryou is adorable. I loved the scene when he was playing around in his new rooms. I hope to see more of him and Dartz later, and I'm dying for Seto and Bakura to finally hook up.

'Hormonal Reaction to Proximity' and 'becming more like Seto' *dies laughing* Soooooooo funnnyyyyyyy! Poor Mokuba, turning into a man so fast. And that whole thing with Yugi and the TV? Pure genius! I couldn't stop laughing...gotta show that to Nat (my little brother also likes your stories, believe it or not!)

You do have a point with the chapter thing, but I don't think you have to worry too much, you have a lot of fans and I see reviews from new people every day. Even if people aren't instantly hooked on it, if they see a lot of people like it or read something else of yours, they will probably end up reading it (and liking it since your a great writer.) I myself wasn't so sure about the Neko fic at the beggining (mostly because I was like 'huh?'), but I was already hooked on the Kimi series, so I read past the first chapter and was hooked. So I don't think you need to start a part 2, but it's up to you.

Fabulous as always! though I'm still dying to see what you're gonna do to the regular kimi Ga Iru universe.... *big watery eyes*

I don't think you should really worry about the chapter length, I didn't start reading until it was nearing twenty and I'm totally hooked! The first chapter was so good! You hooked me and my best friend with it instantly! We were both devestated after the death of Akefia, and so totally in love with your adorable little Ryou neko, that not reading it because of chapter length seemed to be sheer folly!

And yeah, I SO caught the Sailor Moon references! I just haven't been online in so long... Like a week or so. Work's knocked me for a loop, and I got a new Mercedes Lackey book... so yeah, real life has been calling me! lol

Oh yeah, I especially liked the little scene with Noa and Mokuba. Poor Mokie, I bet he was tempted to ravish the little neko then and there! But how did He kow that Kaiba had a thing for nekos? I don't remember any mentions of him knowing before... There's very little interaction between the 2 brothers in this fic as well.

Ne, I just had another thought! If you want to start up a new story/sequal like you did for the original Kimi ga Iru, I would give this one a definate ending first, because so far you have alot of lose ends running around and an impossibly huge cast to divide your time between. It seems that any semblance of plot that you had, has been inadvertantly pushed to the wayside by necessary 'filler'. there's so much character developement, that it pushes back the normally schedualed plot, thus expanding chapter length. That noted, I have to ask for more intrigue and mystery... or more Kimi ga Iru... whichever... *grin*

-Hikaru!

i like the yugi/marik scenes you set up. they're well done! yay for bakura's brotherly streak! hope it works out!

as for the chapter thing, i understand where you're coming from as i'm a bit iffy on reading big long stories as well...i think the split story sequel thing is a good idea!

Well, I'm happy that Yugi is happy again! But I still feel bad for Honda and Otogi. Noa/Mokuba made me giggle. And Ryou is still a damn little cutie.

That was really cute! I loved the Marik/Yugi scene where Marik took Yugi off on the motorcycle. Hah, bet that'll make Yugi more popular, lol. So Otogi's in show business, eh? Can't wait to see what he does, too bad he and Malik are growing apart though. I also loved Seto's dirty thoughts, hahaha. I hope there's some Seto/Kura action soon, and Noa/Mokie.

And YES I would still love to see a sequel to "We Gonna Do This!" Yami/Ryou PLEEZE! Pretty, pretty please?

BI: Bwahaha! Give in to the dirty thoughts! But really Seto, it's just hormones...sort of. Poor Noa, I don't think he'll be able to accept the Alabaster brothers at first, especially Bakura. And it looks like Yugi and Marik have a home, or, will have a home after some major remodling (bow down to Yugi, mailbox.) Otogi has it the worst off, in my opinion. He's been, unwillingly, thrown amongst the chaos that is show business and his boyfriend has been wandering lately. Things can only get worse for him before they get better.
Muse: Ok, time's up. You gave up on the report but you have to get to bed. *grabs BI*
BI: Wait! Thank you again for the two one-shots! You definately don't owe me one-ack!
Muse: *yanks* Bed!

:snicker: can't wait to read when bakura is finally moved in...that will be very fun. great chapter, lots of humorish stuff! i like it!