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this so deppressing, I love it!

.....
*Shakes head*
Just... amazing.
Amazing story.
Amazing details.
You have amazing talents!
This is a masterpiece.

T___T I read this elsewhere a good while back, and yet this still tugs at my heart quite powerfully.
I love it.
Everything you worked into this fic was executed remarkably, the emotions, details, numbed thought process... all of it.
*hearts* MarikxYami is a hard pairing to run across, and even if this didn't end pleasantly, I adore the fic all the same.
Amazing job ^^ *love & adoration*

OMG that was awsome
I would love a sequel to that story...ITS WAS SO SAD!!! I was crying. Please make a sequel to this!

It was sad.

Oh. My. God. Beautiful. This fic was just so beautiful! I mean wow!! Awesome job! I loved it. So much angst in it. Now this is the type of good writings that I can never find anymore. Thank you so much for this beautiful fic. I loved it so much. Awesome job!!

this was a deeply disturbing piece....... please don't get me wrong, I'm not flaming you, it was just very very... dark. Aside from a few typing errors, I think it's an amazing piece of writing, you methodically take the reader down the path of no return. You can feel Yugi's frustration and Yami's downward spiral. I think you might enjoy this other story, called HEAT..... it's for a manga called Viewfinder. Both you and that author are able to write such emotionally moving stories without making them cheesy...

Something seemed to go wrong with my computer screen while I was reading this. The words started to go all fuzzy & wavy, & blending together, as if I was reading them through water. Then. I realized that was just what I was doing. A good story, but, boo - hoo, now I seriosly have to go read something happy, happy, happy before I call it a night. You should write sequel, a happy one!

oh god...I can't belive it. Jesus christ that's so heart-wrenching. what can i say? I think i need a minute or two to recover from the sadness of this all. you really did a good job of evoking the feelings of isolation and sadness. and that last line of the story just drove it home. Black minus white equals invisible. just utterly perfect. Your going on my favourites list right away. this really good. i applaud. keep writing. i think you should definitely do a sequel, i don't what the hell its going to be about but damn you just can't go wrong with the heavy shit you put into your writing.

love
fero-chan

Fuck, fuck, fuck. ;-; Y'know, it isn't exactly a smart action, to read two depressing stories within an hour... It causes one to cry all over his/her/its keyboard like some idiot lacking a life at seven in the evening..

I liked it. A lot. ._. Though, it's never good for me to read or think of depression/gloomeh things. Just, kinda makes things go wrong?