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interesting slang yanno... ive never heard those IRL... and im an aussie. :P

nice chater! go jou! hes so nice :huggles jou:

*cries* poor jou. Damn u 4 doing this 2 him

Ausome fanfiction cant believe they liplocked please update soon cant wait i read the others Yugioh Rocks!! seeya

Hmmm...must have been too sleepy to notice whatcha meant one writing your names :P lol to sleepy to notice anything now a days and the next thing you know I'm writing shorter reviews for yea! -__- Zzzzz...I'M AWAKE! I'M REVIEWING!@_@

Poor Jou! Seriously it's so not his luck! XP Why don't ppl like Jou? I like him now even if he's a slop, he's a good person...he sometimes reminds me of a puppy ^_^ hehehehe if Jou fan-girls read this I think they would FLAME yea...XP ouchie! What Ryou said was really hurtful and if I was Jou I would try and prove them wrong...then rub it in their faces! :P Oh well it's Jou's decision on wat to do...lol atleast Jou told it to them :P may the guilt eat them inside until they apoligize AND Jou forgives them!...So what's the deal with Jou going to his old man? Miss him or something or is it that his old home is the only place he can go to? I wonder when Jou will be with the love of his life...lol hopefully soon!...Z_Z....Zzzzzz....?...Am I still reviewing? Nope think I'm done?...XP

So anyways great chappie and I can't wait for the next one! @_@ I've been waiting ALL day since I've woken up for this chappie and if you didn't I thought I would go crazy! @_@...->...^_^ So anyways UPdate as SOON as you can...:mutter: before my sanity is lost :mutter:...^_^ Ja ne!...

*frowns* I feel bad for Jou! The hikaris were kind of cruel to him. *baps them*

damn.. Yugi, malik and Ryou, damn just shot the poor boy. I mean I like the rap and rock( Long live Hiphop!) and shit but I got to be on Ryou said with the whole talking think. I had to read that part over i didn't know what the hell Jou and Varon where saying! Yet I can't talk, I talk da same way. anways dude Jou did you just go back home?! What the hell?! will if he hit you, take a kife and cut his neck! UAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHA


anyway..... UPDATE SOON I LOVE YOUR FICS!

*Pout* Ryou was mean!!! BAD RYOU, grrr I dunno ever since Ryou go more confidence that boy has become fcked up, not that he wasn't before but now its in a mean way. Aww well I have faith in you and it'll all come well in the end! Although i do have this urge to dive in there and kciks some booty, alright so Jou ain't perfect neither are they! lol anyways I totally loved the chappie so don't feel unhappy about it, I'm writing my own fic at the mo, and I started saying 'I'm not happy with this chappie' and it just put me in a downward spiral of not liking any of it, don't go into the spiral stay away!!! Saying that I've got a case of writers block at the moment so maybe i should be quiet, *zips lips* mmph mpph mphh *unzip* meh anyway I totally loved the ending it almost broke my heart, Jou is a lovely bloke really and cares for his dad despite everything *sigh* so kawaii! Anwasy thats me off for now LOVE IT! Velvetina xx

Aw! Poor Jou! I feel so bad for him. Ryou was so mean! I didn't realize he could be that mean...*scratches head* But no, that isn't critism about your fic. I read that Author's Note in Kimi Ga Iru (Did I spell that right? My memory is hopeless -_-) and I know what you say is true...actually I find it funny how you said you could turn Marik into a boy scout...makes me wonder (gets lost in evil nasty thoughts) Anyway...geez, I AM distracted, because I just pictured Ryou's reaction at some of the n00bs on Gaia...anyway, good chapter! I'm looking forward to more!

So tired -__- Zzzzz...I could be sleeping rite now and YET I'm reviewing your story cuz I'm a LOYAL reviewer XP Oh the joys of R&R!
So anyways another fine chappie UPdated! Atleast Jou is getting along with his dad, his dad seems to be ok now and is TRYING to turn over a new leaf!
FINALLY Varon is seeing the BIG picture of Mia...yuck the rich dude that Varon was talking about, it better not be that stupid guy actor what'shisname! -_- not like his name is important...so he takes out his sorrows by taking Jou with him to a club, drink, and try to meet women. Hey! He made his first move on Jou!...?...does it count when your drunk? And y the heck did he become drunk when he reached his apartment? liquor tolerance? :P I don't think so! i doubt Varon will remember it since he was a happy drunk when he kissed Jou...AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! He's not straight anymore...well he might still think he's straight since he might not remember, but then Jou will remember it...he'll probably conclude that Varon wasn't in his rite mind and was to drunk and horny to know that it was Jou that he was kissing...
^_^ So great chappie and I can't wait for the next UPdated chappie! :BIGyawn:-_- time to take a nappy nap now...ZzzzzZzzzz...hmmm bishies and yaoi...ZzzzZzzz...

So glad you updated this story quickly. Chap 2 had me feeling so sad for Joey. This one left me feeling better.