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Varson wans kiss da boy... lalla kiss da boy! Whoa.. little mermaid song going on here.... ANYWAY! Like it , you cheats on Varon?! Mai is a ass whole, Varon is SEXY!

Poor Jou.. I feel like he does right now.

You like staying awake in night, don't you...? x.X'
Well, so do I ^_^
I like I like I like and I want MOOOREEE!!! o____o''''
*faints*

Wow...just wow...that was a really nice way to dump someone; XP and an easy way to get cash by stealing back the stolen ring you give to your ex-gf and selling it to a pawn shop ^_^ NICE! FINALLY he broke up with her! XP and it must be a small world meeting Ryou and Laik on a nite out...atleast it wasn't Marik and Bakura not THAT would be scary...:drool: unless you were a girl...
Wat was the deal with Jou and Varon at Varon's apartment when Jou was gonna leave? -__- I dind't get it can yea explain it to? Was it in their heads or did it really happen XP AHHHH my brain can't figure it out! ARGH!....
So Varon DOES remember he kissed Jou when he was drunk...how can he do that? Usually drunks don't remember some parts of when they were drinking...was he actually drunk?...^_^ but HEY atleast he's starting to relize somethings about himself!...LIKE...-__- he's not STRAIGHT so that means he's GAY and should be with JOU...^_^ There it's as simple as that!
WHAT! @_@ I WANT TO READ EVERY ONE-SHOT YOU WRITE!...including the adventures of Ryou and Malik! ^_^ So pls write ur stories and i'll R&R!

That was good. Something sure seems to be developing. I appreciate how quickly you update. thanx

You do a great job with dialogue and characterization, although I always saw Ryous as a bit kinder than that. It's just starting to get interesting, I think, so you better update! *laugh* nah, take your time. But it's great. ^_^

Yo yo yo!! Yay two chappies I'm all happy now. Actutally i almst cried at the end of that last chappie, its just so damn sweet and heartbreaking. Stupid bloomin Mai screwing Varon up like that and poor poor Jou getting that backlash of it thinking no-ne cares for him, its just so sad. Gawd I love your work, it never faisl to reach me on some level.

I can't wait to see what you do next, you constantly manage to surprise me, one shot? There's a one shot? I missed that, eek I promise to go find that in a second. Ryou and Maliks adventure? That definatly sounds interesting and makes me wonder what the hell Ryou is up to now...hmmm sounds like trouble to me.

Love it! Velvetina xx

That was ^_^ Are you going to write about Malik and Ryou's little adventure? Heh, the image of them curled up together in front of the TV.. KAWAII :) Updates! You sure are a night owl, aren't you? Or.. would that be a morning lark? ;)

RD: well really Varon its not that hard u know i mean has nothing been fowarded to u in the knowledge of prefs not everyones going to go down the straight and narrow Varon did it ever occur to u that u may be in the Bi category i mean its more the beyond obvious u like Joey and hes ten no A THOUSAND times better then Mai at least he understands what its like being on the rough end of things its not ez believe me well Schwarz keep up the great work and update soon gtg now JA NE ^__^

I finally selected song to listen to while reading this fic! ^w^ (selecting right song is very important :3)