rate_review Reviews

*applause* Nicely done! Looking forward to their one shot........or maybe a whole story. I want to see Jou move out of Ryou's, Jou doesn't deserve to be there either.

Sorry I need to amend my review. Jou deserves Better than to be at Ryou's, he doesn't need to be dissed by his "friends" like he was.
That's why I want to see him move out and on to better things!

What an ODD way to end!-_-So anyways great story :although I would have like a LOT more LIMEif that was ok:...^_^ but it still was ok! GO VARONxJOU! ^_^
Oh joys! I can't wait for the one-shot of Marik/Yugi and the rest of the gang :P! AHAH! I knew it was Honda that was abusing Espa! T_T Poor Espa! Now I feel sorry for him cuz he got stuck with...HIM of all ppl...fanfiction Honda i mean XP so anyways I'll R&R for your one-shots and I hope you can make one-shots on JOU/VARON...lol ^_^ Ja ne!

Aw, the ending was sugary sweet. Maybe the relationship can work; there doesn't seem to be anything stopping them from being together. Oh, tell me there's some climax sometime. I'm paranoid.

yea 4 jou & varon but does jou still think that its because varon misses mai?

It...it is the end? Like...The End...? For real...? No kidding...? Or did I just got it wrong...? o.O'''
Wow...^_^'

Gah thats the end? Well it was a pretty damn good ending but I'm all sad now *pout* Oh well I have lots of nice one shots to look foward to so I'm just gonna be happy about that.

Although your stories are starting to have an effect on me. I got a small plotline in my head the other day involving a Shadi/Rishid pairing and an Isizu/Shizuka pairing. I've never see those pairings written before and never though of them before so I can only conclude its your influence on me! However I'm not gonna write it, I just don't thik i could pull it off, *sigh*

Anyways I liked the lack of sap in this story, I have no objections to sap like it totally works for Ryou/Dartz but not for the pairing, so you read my thoughts totally, or maybe i read yours?! Gah I don't know either way its good and I'm happy.

My fave part in this chappie was...well I have to bits, I loved it when Varon was like...I'll just go put some pants on...I don't know why it cracked me up. and the second part was when the sprinklers turned on, i was just bwahahahaha..ing my most evil laugh. I just had this outraged image of wtf on their faces in my mind untill they found it funny.

Ok so that wasn't my best reviewn but I try. As ever LOVE IT!

Velvetina xx

Can't wait for more stories! And I dying to see if Jou finally moves out from Ryou's place and gets his own or moves in with Varon. But, I'll wait and read. I keep enough people waiting with my updates after all ^^;;

I found the chapter ending hilarious. Varon coming onto Jou, and Jou stealing his back-- nice guys, ne.

Wow, I like. Jou and Varon, just living and not making any complicated love story or over angst drama, it works.