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for Hunger

by Ykarzel

person Hannah
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alright, alright...you convinced me to review *throws confetti* WOOP! You deserve it though, it is Kinda selfish for me to read it and not review it...if I was an author I'd go crazy...I love this story, update it soon! I want them to meet again!
person Jessica
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that was soooooo hot! Jou's point of view was hilarious; the whole fact that he was admiring Seto's cock...my eyes almost bugged out from embarrassment..shock..horror..and downright intrigue!...I'm so shameless...o_o...anyhoo...liked the small cameo from Jason; that scene was really funny! I can't wait to read the final chapter: the reveal! I'm so excited! I love your work!...SO EXCITED!...*jumps off chair to do happy panda dance*...WOOT! I'll be here waiting...

...and I'm sorry to hear you only received like 15 reviews...I try my best to let authors know how much I appreciate their work; it doesn't kill them (the readers) to reciprocate some of their time for the time authors produce to slave over their fanfics! I just wanted you to know that I loved it! Ja ne! ^_^
person Lee
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I, for one, was shocked to speachlessness. I have never heard of this before ... comes with living in a very small town I suppose. I just hope that there will be an identity discovery in the final chapter. I just like the two actually pairing up in the end.
person vixenia
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh this is getting suspenseful. keep it up.
person Stellar Welsh
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your Story has got, I must tell you, the rarest plot I have ever come across (which makes it, for me, an interesting story). I wonder what will happen in the next chapter. I cannot picture something like that in real life, i've never been to the men's bathroom, but you mentioned having done a lot of research for the last chapter. So, Is it something actually true? I'm very curious. Please update soon and don't leave us floating in the midst of suspense for too long.

person ...
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
.......hmmmmm.....the suspense is building.......when will seto found out it was jou?........will jou find out it was seto first?.......hmmmmm.........^^........i have a feeling that this story is going to continue on at school......okay^^.......its not a feeling, its a selfish hope, because then seto and jou would see more of eachother ^.~........i con't wait to see the next chapter, and i'm sorry that people are stupid and won't review to you......*hugs*........Ja ne!
person Alea
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do wonder how theyre going to meet, so update soon!!
person ...
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
.......^^......great chappie!......jou........hungry........hungry for cock.......hmmmm........seto's cock^^........hehehe........sooooo......./will/ seto come back to the theatre again?...........or will he maybe be leaving the theatre when he sees jou leaving too........but seto wouldn't know that it was jou who had just given him head..........but, then again, jou might be able to tell that seto was the one who had been on the other side of the wall, because he /did/ see seto'd pants^^ (gods that sounded so crappy.......like, there might be someone else with the same pants.......but they /are/ in a crappy part of the city, ne? so there might not be too many people who wore pants like kaiba's....) mayhap im just thinking too much^.~.........great chapter, and good job with the speed of the update^^.........loves! *hug*
person vixenia
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow so it was joey. YES I KNEW IT. Update soon.
person nancy
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm ive never read a fic like that before, but it was really well written and i enjoyed it. Are there any more chapters or is that all there is?