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well... even if they did find out, i guess noone would prosecute, hes just a street kid. <_< *glare of doom 562 at police*

Wow, i thought this was just a once shot when I read it before. I really like what you've done so far!

Wow, this is amazingly well-written. Very dark, and very sad, but you've pulled it off very well so far. Can't wait to read the rest.

Heh, thanks. *hug* 'Course I came back- this isn't over yet! Given what's been covered already in the story, (seeing Gozaburo and now Jou), I'd think Seto's hallucinating. I'm looking forward to the paranoia and manic delusions- if this is what I think it is. You're right, though; half the fun is in the guessing.
I feel bad for Yugi- losing your best friend is very hard. Also, hello to Yami Yugi! Seto's life is about to become a living hell, I bet. Well, more than it already is, anyway.

And last, but not least- glad you found it funny. I can't believe that no-one else had thought of that. :)

gyah! what happened to jou... it didnt sound like seto was hallucinating...

and poor yuug... ;_;

i almost missed this... (i know, dumb me) but im glad i didnt.

and the others wont know... hopefully... ._.

I don’t think you should wince at spring it is an excellent story and you should be proud of it. It is the type of story that can be read and reread god knows I’ve read it three times and still love it. Plus the fact that you are trying something new with shovel shows that you are broadening your writing skills into a new area which I am loving very much. I’m happy you decided to post a new fic as I’ve been patiently waiting for you to post. Although I was hoping for a sequel to spring, as I wanted to know what happen with Jou and Seto. But shovel has captivated me as much as spring and I can’t wait to read the next update. You have real talent

P.S. sorry I called you a ;)meanie your not reallyJ

:yelps: blipping 'ell. he scared the crud outta me...

:shivers: damn me and my tnedancy to read kinky fics... ill probly stick with this.

cant believe he lost control that way tho...

meanie
oh don't worry i will stick around i loved your other fic A Love / Hate Relationship With Spring and i can't wait to see what you can cook up in the way of Suspense for this one
update soon :)

Very much so. Seto's hallucinating now? That's not a good sign.
Heh, from the title of this fic, I was expecting Seto to end up dumping Jou in the Pet Semetery (no pun intended).

Woooh you rock! Never before have I come across such a thriller and shocker. I really really love the way you've weaved this story and I think how you've explored the depths of the human psyche is incredible. I'll be checking back alot! An extremely commendable read from someone who has wonderful talent. I can't wait for the rest!