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what happend Joey still alive that's a no brainer you said he was breathing again did Seto brake his neck by assadint or what god i'm freaked out!

A great story...but ugh! So depressing and.....graphic....i think I feel a little sick :S
Its kind of a happy ending, but somehow I dont think they end up going to the same place. Did jou make kaiba kill himself as revenge, or did he just have a screw or two loose in the head? Somehow I cant see him as the sanest character. Oh well, im glad you updated and the story is done. I hope to read more of your work ( is a happy ending to much to ask for though :) )

Totally disturbing. Great, of course, too. Got to love how Bakura is the only one getting the "happy ending", because with everything getting so out of hand, it's survival of the fittest, isn't it (and the most insane ones). Don't know how you managed to write 12 chapters of complete and unrelenting gruesomness without getting depressed. Fanfic writers usually love the characters too much to put them through intense torment for so long.
However, you got to loooove the madness!

Hey! Coolies! I see you put the story on AFF! yes, I am a sick lil puppy who likes this story. But I don't like that Jou is dead. Which makes absolutely no sense at all, since if he wasn't dead, there wouldn't be a story now, would there? But when have I ever made sense? Never. That's when. I just wanna take all the sick lil bishies and hug 'em all.

*sniffle* It's so sad! Creepy too, and sexy, but sad! That's...all I can say. ^^;;

For Ch. 6-
Thank *you*, first off. The way I see it, it's the reviewers job to provide comprehensive reviews, to help you, the author, in writing your story. I was impressed at all the hints you dropped- not many authors do that, and it makes the story that much more enjoyable. Sad I missed the mark, but half the fun is in the searching. :)
Not so fond of Ryou/Jou, but I guess it's a moot point anyway. Also, Yami Bakura! Very good, strong characterization for him. Yami's pretty callous here- he basically ordered someone's death, not to mention coersion of a police officer for information. Then again, I don't blame him at all.
(17-18? That would fit. "Unlike other mental disorders, the onset of most forms of psychosis occurs in the late teens to early twenties." Donald Lunde, 'Murder and Madness')

Hey, I still love your story! I started reading on the lair...and you havn't updated in forever! *tears* Im hoping the rest of the story will mosey onto AFF eventually. I like how you make little challanges and write to your reviewers as well, it makes it more interesting ^^

I just re-discovered this fic. I'm really getting E.A. Poe vibes off of it, having Jou showing up post mortem to harrass Seto. I can't wait to see what Bakura does during his investigation.

Creepy....but very well written ^_^. This fic has got my heart pounding. I love it! I just read the whole fic and I'm on the edge of my seat. Please update soon, I've become addicted to your writing!

OMG, OMG, OMG!!!!!!! This is such an AWESOME fic!!! I'm just LOVING it!!!! You are one of best authors on here, FOR SURE!!! Your writing style is so unique...it draws me right in and I can picture everything PERFECTLY!!!! Yes, I love yaoi, but I won't read just ANY old fic!!! I want it to have a beginning, a middle, an end, sentence/paragraph structure, PLOT and of course sex scenes, but most of all good writing to tie it all together!!! And you've done just that!! You. Are just. AWESOME!!!! My hand just flew to my mouth in shock when I read "....faintly heard snapping sound..." because I figured something bad happend to Jou!!! And I totally teared up at Seto's reaction when he realized Jou was dead...*sob* And when he got out of the car in the woods and threw up from grief...omg...it was so SAD!!! And you TOTALLY surprised me when Jou came back to face Seto in the bathroom!!! That just totally freaked me out!!! Straight from Pet Cemetry!!! But with bishies!!! You were right...I kinda did have nightmares that night...well, mostly scared to close my eyes in case the next time I opened them, I saw Jou standing next to me with a scarred neck!! But I was all right...I was comforted when I thought about Seto kissing Jou in the woods and grinding against him, even though he was dead...it was so exrotic!!! I've NEVER read a fic like yours before!!! I just love all the twists and turns!!! I thank you soooo much for making this fic!! You totally rock!!! I've been itching to make my own fic for quite awhile...I have a plot and all that, I just need to get typing! And your fic might be just the inspiration I needed!!! So I thank you even more!! Keep up the great work!! It's really appreciated, especially by me, if not everyone!!! :) Lotsa love!! Take care!!!