rate_review Reviews

Mostly horrifying story I've read for some time..And I loved it!...Except for Bakura raping Jou's face....That just kinda pissed me off a bit. That asshole.

So beautiful <3 I just about started crying...
I kinda wish there was a little more added to the ending, but either way, it was the best story I've ever seen!!

Oh....man...I'm scared now....Oh man. I think I'm going to have some nightmares tonight. T_T;;;;; Either way, I really liked it. It's sad that Seto went to Hell or in that layer of Hell, never to be with Jou ever again. But...that's what happens when you're a spoiled brat...

Truly one of the most brilliant works I've ever ever read. Dark and melancholic yet touching at the same time. I enjoyed how you wrote Seto going insane. Very deep thought and a good amount of description. I like how you "bring the reader there". I found it slightly disturbing yet definitely intruiging and an altogether excellent read. I can't wait to read the rest. You're a real genius.

Oh gods I missed all the game goodness. >.< I feel so sad that had such a big lapse in reading fanfiction. I think it's a crime that I pulled myself away from something I love for so long. T_T I'm on Chapter 6 now and I'm so addicted to this fic that I should be sleeping but I'm not.

I really love how you've foreshadowed everything so well. Nice use of Literature there! I like how you write Seto as being extremely tormented by everything. After what he did to Jou I feel like screaming "HAH! You deserve this," but I honestly can't help but sympathise with him!

This is one AWSOME story. SOO SAD and VERY HEARTWRENCHING. All I can say is WOOW. Incredibly well written. The characters were very developed and believable.

One of the BEST fanfictions I have read so far.

Exellent job!!

~*m0vi3ang3l*~

O.o

...rather disturbing, but I read it all anyhow. @_@ Very well written. I'm close to tears and my heart just goes out to poor Ryou on this one. It's just so sad!!!

*sniffles*

It was brilliantly executed, and I like how true to character you stayed with each and every person.

Wow...*mouth gapes, opening and closing with no sound* that was...amazing! *shakes hand furiously* *overcome with awe* I'm so glad you didn't back down from the squicky bits...thought the actual 'squickiest' bit was very well and tastfully done...

Good call on the funeral things..like all the embalming details and stuff...very genuine...added to the whole scene very well...

Quite sad with Seto-san at the end...*wipes tear* But chracterization was great...crazy Seto made me laugh...*grin*

All in all a big fat 10 for effort and plot and all those other insignificant things! lmao!

Great work, i loved it! Write more! lol

Hellagoddess ^______^ V

I'm only at the beginning of chapter three but I had to take a minute to tell you how well written this story is. You didn't shy away from picking off a main character (or did you? *grin*) and your telling of the tale is superb. Can't wait to finish it.

zehlyah

Heh.

This fic has now throroughly convinced me to have cremate my remains after I die. (And yes, I did snicker at the grossness of it all. Poor Jouno...)