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wow poor yugi-chan!!! update again soon!!

Nope u did'nt over do it a bit , I am just sad that that will be their first and last time together.

Ahhh I dunno what to say except I'm anticipating the next chapter!!! And wonderful lemon ^^

This was so hot and sad. Poor Yugi, now that they have consummated their relationship he has to leave. If Fastosus can keep up with Yugi, he will die in a most painful way.
I'm glad he didn't let Pragus out.
I thought the lemon was really hot and good.
I feel bad for Yami and I hope they do succeed in getting Yugi back and a body for Yami.
Great chapter.

I don't think you killed the lemon at all. Ooh, I really really really really (you get the idea) wanna find out what happens! Pleeeeeeeeease update super-soon so I can read more! MY BRAIN SHALL EXPLODE FROM THE WAITING!

Oh this just gets better and better....Don't change anything! the sex scene was well done and did show the feelings you wanted it too...Honda's still a jerk and you just gotta love granpa and his sneaky-ness ^__^ more please...

gah!!!! Evil cliffy! Darn it, please have the next chapter up soon. I can't wait to see what happens. And to think, there's still followup as Yugi faces his yami when he gets back. *bounces* Can't wait!!!

Way to go, Lechan! I thought that was a wonderful chapter and I didn't think the lemon was cut off or something. Still, I can't believe that this story is coming to an end. Though I'm really looking forward to the next one. I'd like to add one more thing: The translations at the end are a little bit confusing. When I read it in the chapter I have to go all the way down to understand what it means and then try to find the place I left off. It's not that bad, but maybe you could insert the translation in the text using (bla). This switching to the translations kind of kills the mood. But besides this: WONDERFUL work

*sniff* whats gonna happen??? how r ya gonna leave us hangin like this lol hope u update soon

gods...this fic is getting SO exciting!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to know what happens next, but at the same time I don't wanna know cause that will be the end of this fic! TT___TT

I love this fic so much....*hugs it* the SetoxJou bit was great X3