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OMG....this was so sad...I can't believe Yugi's gone.... it's not fair...*cries* Anyways awesome work keep it

That chapter was so sad. Atemu for so long was alone, now he have found his partner, his love and have lose him. That is so injustice. Save Atemu’s future, his live have Yugi sacrifice himself. I hope that gang will ask Ptah not for body for Yugi - hi has body, but for Yami. Lechan - update soon, I can't wait for next chapter, when Yugi will come back to Yami, to love him - all night.

OH CRAP THIS WAS MADNESS! FREAKING MADNESS! Wah! I can't wait to see what happens next about Yugi and his body and Yami and his body and Pharoah and the artist formerly known as Pharoah! Goodness!

Please update soon! Need. Closure T T

Aww...this new chapter (number 15) is so sad...;_;

It's not the last one is it? O_O *prays its not* You wouldn't leave us hanging like that, would you? XD

Anyway, I thought it was really good, regardless. Only a couple of errors, and they're not too bad so it was easy to figure out what you meant. XD'''

AND I'M SO GLAD YOU'RE UPDATING AGAIN, ZOMG!!! ^_____^ <3333
I know I didn't review the last couple of new chapters you posted, my computer has been acting funny or else I would have said so before now...
THANK YOU FOR UPDATING AGAIN!!! <3333 I love this story so much, its fantastic. I'm so glad it didn't end up dying. ^___^ <3333

**Yume no Kareta

P.S. I hate Fastosus too. But in a you're-pitiful-you-suck kind of way...XD

Such an amazing story.

Sorry, just have to review twice, seeing as I skimmed through the chapter yesterday. I read it fully today, and mind you I was listening to Elton John's "No sacrifice", which is weird in itself (I like Alternative music), god, I balled my eyes out. I definitely don't recommend that. The music in itself was creepy when I was reading this! I haven't ever had anyone make me cry while reading. It just shows what an awesome author you are. I am going to delete that song off of my computer now! I don't want to hear it again. Later

Two chapters? In week I have no time to revievs. I love love scene with Atemu and Yugi. Yugi have finally understend that he love Atemu and Yami. Poor Atemu he is so good king ho worry for his kingdom and people. I'm glad that Yugi is now for him. I know that he must go, but he will help Atemu and will be back with Yami, right? And Yami will love him very much - meant in bed - all night, to show his love, for his akhu. Please Yugi come back for Yami, he is daing without you. I hope that will you write when Yugi in order to show Yami that he love him will dominate Yami. I like that. When not in this story, in other story?. I hope that ceaser will die from Atemus hand. Can't wait for next chapter.

Dear f@#king God...that was great...some spelling errors but that happens when one is rushed...you can blame me if you want...since Im always emailing, cracking the whip over your head to hurry up and update...laughs...man talking about needing the kleenex twice...shit that was awesome...cannot wait for the next update...man cannot wait....cannot wait...cannot wait...cannot wait...laughs...catti

You killed Yugi! *sniff* That was sooo sad! Oh please update soon, please don't leave it like that, please?! On another note, I'm glad that little good for nothing Roman got what he deserved! If only his partner would have gotten his share of the suffering! Reallly great chapter!

I love yooou ;.; write more please xD