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I was so happy that you updated!!!!!! this chapter was great!!!!!!!! But I just can't wait to see what happens next!!!!! I do have a question, will we see hints of Seto and Jonouchi? Since their past selves liked each other, it would be interesting to see some small hints of it. Anyway I'm looking forward to what happens next!!!!!!!!!!

That chapter was beautiful, simply beautiful. It made me cry more than once and I snapped at anyone who tried to talk to me while I was reading...I'll have to apoligise to them soon.

I found the story easy enough to understand once I got the timeline straight in my head, though it was a little confusing at some parts. Modern day Yami is the one that spoke to Yugi in his soul room, yes? Is the reason why he wasn't more happy to see him because he doesn't know how to act around his light- the person he still believes his past self raped? I was sure he'd figured it out by now, after feeling the emotions of Atemu when Yugi died...unless he only saw the memories... Oh, that makes sense, ignore my mindless rambling. ^_^;

Still, it woulld clear up a lot of things if there was an internal Yami monologue or Yami POV next chapter. Then again, I doubt you're not going to have one in the LAST chapter so I don't think you really need my input.

A million and one out of ten for this update!

Best regards,


*Shadow In Flight*

OMG this is soo good please keep it up

SQUEAL An update! *sorry couldn't resist* This is one hell of a story and I've enjoyed every minute of it, the laughter and the tears and even the aww's. I hope that you have a happy ending planned for Yami and Yugi now that he's home... can't wait for the epilogue!

This chapter was beatiful, awsome. Atem's death was so sad and full of love for his people and Yugi, and so full hope, that he will see his Yugi, his mrtw (I don't know how good have I write that)in future. I love your's shifts betwen past - Khemet and future - Domino. Yami's fear, Atemu's pain and Yugi's love and hope. I can't wait to see, how Yugi will show Yami that he love him. I must tell that I love seme Yugi. I will be wait for next chapter.

You AWE me, Lechan! Somehow your writing is always so fresh and orginal...it's the sort of writing that's rare to find. I loved the chapter, and how you didn't tell it in strict time order, but rather all muddled up - kind of reflected Yami and Yugi's states of mind. And you made them get back together again! Huzzah! Now we just need Yami and Yugi to confess to each other and all loose ends are tied. Uh, you ARE gonna do that...right?

That was so awesome, a little confusing but Im sure it will straighten itself out...catti...

This was well worth the wait. They are back together. I just hope they can get Yami a body. I think Honda will accept their love soon. I'm not so sure about Rebecca. I can't wait for the next chapter.

That chapter was AWESOME!!!! Please, please let this be a happy ending?! I don't think I could stand it if they weren't together. Snif! I so love this story!!!!

wow. i love this story with all my heart!!! the past two chapters have made me cry...you've made it so its heartbreaking to have yami and yugi seperated. T_T i can't even express my love of this story. its the absolute best FF ive ever read! im telling the truth about that. it made me start writing them <3