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May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hello, well this has been the best story I have read
here, but I have to say that the epilog was a litle...... well...
to sweet nothing really hapend in it.
but like a have said befor, keep wrighting storys just as good
as this and you wil get many rewiews.
chiao
here, but I have to say that the epilog was a litle...... well...
to sweet nothing really hapend in it.
but like a have said befor, keep wrighting storys just as good
as this and you wil get many rewiews.
chiao
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May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow...that was...the BEST LEMON EVER!!!
You really do excel at sex scenes. And non-sex scenes. And every other type of scene as well. Characters were beautifully portrayed, everything was realistic, wonderfully described, it was...just...perfect. This is writing at it's best, no arguements. I'm yet to read the epilogue and extra stories...I will do soon, but for now I'm still reveling in the sheer perfection of that chapter. It took you two years to write, and the time and effort you put into the story really comes through.
You really do excel at sex scenes. And non-sex scenes. And every other type of scene as well. Characters were beautifully portrayed, everything was realistic, wonderfully described, it was...just...perfect. This is writing at it's best, no arguements. I'm yet to read the epilogue and extra stories...I will do soon, but for now I'm still reveling in the sheer perfection of that chapter. It took you two years to write, and the time and effort you put into the story really comes through.
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May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw, so sweet. I can't imagine what it would be like to never know rain though...it rains all the time where I'm from, and everyone always complains about it, but I love the rain. And rain that soaks you through in a matter of minutes...well, that's the best kind!
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May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another sweet addition to the story. I'm glad you portrayed Anzu as a nice person, not bashed her like she is in a lot of fanfiction. I mean, don't get me wrong, I don't particularly like her and her friendship speeches, but I don't believe in the bashing of characters. It's refreshing that someone's decided to show her as a genuinely good friend, not someone who's just after Yami or anything. Congrats on the story, and good luck with Key of Ra - which I shall also be following closely, I might add.
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May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Now it makes sense why Yami thought he raped Yugi. You planed that all along, little sneaky ^^. Well, I REALLY should work on my project, but knowing you updated this I couldn't resist. I can't believe that you have started this story so long ago. It just seems like yesterday when I read the first chapter. Very good ending. I think it's kind of funny that Yami was the last to know about his hikari's love. Lol, ok, he did know first, but he couldn't believe it. Poor guy!
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May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story is so sweet and beautiful I'm crying!
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May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW that is what I can say. Your story is over and I have been reading it almost when you started. I just love every chapter. I can't wait until you starte your other story The Key of RA. I will be looking for up date on that story soon. until then see you leater
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May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow 0.0.. it's finally over TT. i followed this fic. a year ago and i was chasing it till now. lechan you're a great writer and keep up the good writing. i'll be looking forward to your other fic's!
till next time, neh^^
L.Meh
till next time, neh^^
L.Meh
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May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh sure...some dedication...laughs...damn...I love this story...its almost time to put it to bed...sobs...catti
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May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay...now I liked this....catti