rate_review Reviews

This is a good, entertaining fic. You have one or two grammar/spelling errors throughout, but overall it is well-written and the few errors don't really detract from the story. Your characterization, especially of Yami and Yugi, is very good and in-character. I like that you're making use of background characters from the manga (the archeologist); it's a nice touch and, in my opinion, better than introducing an original character to fill the role. The erotic scenes are just that-- erotic and sensual, very capably handled and very hot! I am eagerly awaiting more of this story!

what could i say i just love the story i love the way you write and how things are going honestly its the best yugioh story i have evef read on this site or the fanfiction site

dont take so long for the next chapter this time kay? anyways i love it so far even though im a malik/marik bakura/ryou fan lol ^-^ well gatta go got a call ja!

its really awsome please keep going

I like your story. There's not enough of these kinds out there. What do the japanese sentences mean? i have no clue.

This is such a great fic.
It's well written, and has been really interesting so far. I love the characterisations of the various people and their thoughts on the situations.
I am also really enjoying reading the whole lead up to the meeting between Atemu and Yugi (rather than just having him end up at the palace on his very first day in Egypt.)

OH very good Please update soon. Also are these Egyptian terms because I've been trying to locate Egyptian terms but can't seem to find any. If it's possible could you email me and tell me how to find them for it would really help with my ancient egypt stories. Again very good please update soon

Ohh!!! I simply can not wait for Atemu and Yugi to see eachother for the first time!! I love Ancient Eygpt stories and this one is turning out ot be one of my favorites yet. I'll have to glue myself to the couch so I don't keep coming back to see if you updated in the next 20 minutes ^^;;

AWE! It was getting good to! *sighs* Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter. This story is very good! I like how you started off, with a dig, and finding out about Yugi and what he had to do with the past. *smiles* It's very creative! Well, hope to see more of your work soon!

I love this story. It's incredibly original. I enjoyed reading it and i hope that you update soon cause i want to know what happens when Atemu and Yugi meet! Keep up the good work! :0)