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well its about time please hurry with the next chapter

Amazing chapter!!! wow! I wish I could write like you.
Poor Yugi, and *poor* Jono when the Pharaoh finds out.

I have been reading your story from the very beginning, and each time I find that I get even more attached to it. I'm addicted and making you entirely responsible for it!
Though I suppose there are worse things to get addicted to, especially in the place I'm from.... Colombia.

Anyway I just wanted to let you know you have some awesome Yu-Gi-Oh! fics.
>>Please forgive the grammar mistakes, English isn't my 1st language (if you ever need help with Spanish don't hesitate to ask).

yay! chappie!! *dances around showering author with cookies* thankyou!!! Poor Yami and yugi!! Hope they get through this alright!

Chlip, chlip poor little Yugi. He don't know that yami love him and Atemu will lust for him. But I am mean I want that Atemu will have little Yugi che che che. Please write quicly next chapter oh please, please ... chibi puppy eyes

KAMI...Waaaayyy too depressing....LOVE IT....I actually had to use half a box of Kleenex....so I hope you keep your promise and not make the next chapter so angsty...is that a word? I am really enjoying this story....it is so well written and you can tell that it is well liked...keep up the good work...I look forward to the next chapter...(by the way, can I have a double whopper with cheese? LAUGHS)....catti

This is great keep it up!

aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! how could you leave it like thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat! i feel all heartbroken for Yuugi, and Yami (not Atemu, at least not right now ^^U)

wow, i'm such as fangirl of this couple (i wouldn't change it for anything else -^___^-) so i can't wait for the chapter, i really like this story! keep it going ^^

Yea you updated *give you a huge hug* Very good, awesome work please update soon but I can't believe Yami or should I say Pharaoh Yami aka Atemu would act like that to Yugi *Swats Yami in the head* Anyway like I said awesome work and hope you update again

damn, that was so sad. and yet it is like a train wreck and I can't stop watching... this is awesome, please write on!

you should no must keep going