rate_review Reviews

Best.
Yu-Gi-Oh.
Fanfiction.
EVER. *o*
Seriously though, so far it's just excellent.
I don't really give a damn if it's not historically correct or not! xD
The only thing that has lightly annoyed me is when Yugi speaks Japanese words that are not translated and explained at the bottom of the fanfic.
For example (if I remember correctly) Yugi cried out: "Oree wa kawai!" when he hugged the Dark Magician. Erm... Does that not mean "I am cute"? Weird...
Other than that, everything is brilliant.
A masterpiece.
...
As I was trying to say...
DO CONTINUE WRITING!!! ^___^

Lechan thank you for tis chapter I love him. i am glad that Yami come and saved Yugi but I really wait wenn yami and yugi will make love. That is Yugi destiny I know that. Lechan please send me that song and wenn you have "Night flover" You know - nov I go to work with "Foolish dream" I muss tell that song is beatiful and passt for Atemu and Yugi. Hurry wenn you can with next chapter from all yors stories.

Oh mrew! I love this story to death. Seriously, I'm pretty much addicted to it. I read what you have up once, then again... and again! Finally you have another chapter, and I was practically squealing through out of it. Need a better description... But thats the general gist of it.

You're writing style is unique and has a flow to it that I've hardly ever seen before. ^^ You write Atemu excellently! I've rarely seen his character so masterfully potrayed!

Pragus IS my eldest brother. >_> Minus the having his way with little boys part. Though I doubt Prego would pay £2 for somebody changing a TV channel for him when he's drunk... Or would he? As a character, Pragus is great, but as a person, he's a bastard. Well done!

I dunno why, but I have the strangest wish for Atemu and Jounouchi to meet. With Yugi there as well. I don't know why it appeals to me so much, but it does!

I can't wait to see the ending of this, so please, please get the next chapter out relatively soon!

Hey Le-chan! Great update. I'm glad that you didn't have Yuugi getting raped by that Roman bastard. I also loved the description that you used to describe the emotions that Atemu was feeling as he watched Yuugi dance, as well as the emotion expressed when you had Yuugi dancing. Wonderful update as usual and hope to read more of this and "Key of Ra." again soon. Oh and if it isn't too much trouble could you send me the song that Yuugi was dancing to?

I really enjoy your story.. I am laughing every time there is a funny moment between Atemu/Yami and Yugi..
I really hope that you continue to update your story cause I want to know what kind of trouble yugi gets into next and if Atemu will confess that he loves Yugi.. heehee.. I hope to hear more from ya.. keep up the good work

I LOVE IT!!!! UPDATE!!!!

I do forgive. I just love this story. this chapter was awsame I can't wait until you up date the next chapter. I hope it will be soon. And thank you for not stoping your story. I hope to read you last chapterin this story, so keet up the good work.

Man Lechan...I have harrassed you...begged you....pleaded with you for an update and then you give me this...it was so fantastic!!! I wanted to cry out this story to everyone....I have waited like forever...I loved your side stories...but it was like a tease...Im here but not giving in to the reviewers to update on one said story...gonna write a one shot and make you wait...torture is not a fun thing for us who are waiting for an update on your most fabulous story...I cannot wait to see what you do with the Romans and Yami...I sense he has no patience with them and hopefully you will write it so that Yami kickes their butts...laughs...keep it up, hopefully you will not make us wait too long for an update....no pressure....catti

yayayayay!!! Yugi gets down with his baaad self! but seriously, thank you so much for the update, especially after the long one shot you just got through with =\ I'm not too crazy about the Romans but I’m fond of the Greeks which I believe weren't as battle hungry as the Romans I think, but don't quote me on that >_- I personally would prefer that you kept it roman. I mean really, who freakin' cares? I'll take a course on yaoi then history any day >3 It's such a minor detail and probably a little bit of a hassle so my vote: keep it roman baby =3

I was a little peeved at yami goin' at it with some one other then yugi but then I remembered that your writings are allot more realistic then most other stories and well... I'll just have to be extremely patient in waiting for the immense yaoi scene. Sigh... Virtue my ass! Being patient sux! >3

*pokes* Ne, you still alive? ^^ Because I didn't hear anything from you for some time now, so I though I leave another review. You story is great, still, and I am still eagerly waiting for the next chapter. *pokes again* By the way, I hope you had a great Christmas and a happy new year?

Greetings


Usagi