rate_review Reviews

*drools* that was one awesome piece of writing! I'm so glad I've stumbled on this!! MHAHAHAA That was an awesome chapter, such a cliff hanger towards the end there. Really it was very very enjoyable to read, and has been all the way through. This plot is really entertaining and Yuugi's constant denial of Gay etc. is deathly amusing. In short this is really fantastic! I'll be watching out for your next update with bated breath.

Cheers

Oh dear... how many donkey years have I waited for your update, although I have good patience, it's just soo long! But, you updated! AHH!! Love ya! /hugs/

Oh dear, this is one terrific chapter! Love it to the core. Nope, you absolutely did not butchered it! Love the scene, finally Atemu have some action... I have been waiting for that moment! I just can't wait for the next chapter... definetely hope it is not as long a wait as waiting for this chapter ^-^

Well, I love how you described Yugi's doubts and Atemu's doubts and needs, very realistic and lovely in the choice of words ^-^

But when Mahado rush in, every bubble burst... (although the little devil in me knew that someone will rush in or something will pop out eventually, I just can't help but wish that it will be longer... more teasing ^-^)

The pace is good, the fic is progressing well. Great work done there, looking forward for more, so please update soon ^-^

xamosy^-^

Love it!!! This is the best YY fic I've read (Not that I've read many .. I'm mostly a SJ and BR fan) I never really cared for YY until a read this one fic a week or two ago, and with this fic, I believe I found myself another 'couple' to be addicted to. Wonderful job! I hope Yugi and Yami will do it already!!!!

its really good i love it please please update PLEASE

It's an UPDATE!!! ^______________^ *squee*

I thought that this chapter was fine, Atemu and Yugi don't seem out of character to me...>.>

I hope you update again soon. ^^ Good luck keeping the schedual, I know I prolly wouldn't be able to...<33

**Yume no Kareta

More, email me when you update please!

O.O OMG I just started reading this and don't want to stop! Please update as soon as you can! I think you're doing a great job with all of the characters, INCLUDING ANZU!! I really don't like her, but guess wat? U make her seem a LOT better than they do in the show! I have to say that I look forward to more of Yugi in the past than I do of Yami in the future though XD Hope to see the next chapter soon. Till then, BYEE!!

~ChibiRinni ^.~

I like it so please continue, now that the cards is shown, what will happen next.
Can't wait to read the next chapter

Mahadoo How could you come. One minute more and Atemu will be make love to Yugi. I know I'm bad, but I love when Atemy dominate Yugi, and that little memories from Atemu are so good. I hope for that will be reallity and Atemu will love Yugi. Lechan I have wait for yours all stories. you don't know how happy have you made me when I have see that you have update. Now I can't wait for next chapter from "Key of Ra" and snipet from "Heart of Ocean" and more. Love and hugs.

This story is so great. I only read it now and I couldn't stop reading it to the point you stoped. I felt as if I was chainted to my computer and couldn't break free. Even thought because your lack in the history part was sometimes... funny... but since you said yourself you didn't research it wasn't bad. I know research takes a lot o time from writing so it is Ok I gess. However, please continue this story (and soon please.... pretty please). Hopefully Yugi'll know soon that he loves Atemu and they'll habe an happy end in the futur and in the past. It is one the story where I don't know if I want to have a fast ending because I feel with the characters or if I want to have it longer because I want ro read even more.

Annuket