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for Memories of Shadow and Light

by Lechan

person rosie
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its interesting, please update soon. good luck
person Anon
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed spending my winter break reading Memories of Shadow and Light. Thanks for writing such an interesting story.

I really hate the Romans. Damn you, Prego-man! That nickname makes me laugh every time Yugi uses it.
person Dara
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for late review. I'm glad taht Yugi have undursted that he love Atemu and Yami. I really hope that in next chapter will be Atemu/Yugi lemon scene, and dance. Will Yugi live now in Atemu chamber? I hope so. Please when you will kill Yugi, make him come back to Yami, to future, of course with memories about love for him - Yami. And make Atemu kill Prago-man, when Yugi will be dead.
person PotionsPet
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey next time you add to this, you think you can send me an email with the web address to let me know?
person my opinion
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have just sat here and read your fic for 3 hours.

What a great job you are doing! I haven't enjoyed fanfiction for such a long time becasue of the lack of good reads lately. This isn't even a fandom I like. I don't even know what made go to Yu-Gi-Oh fiction in the first place..let alone pick your paticular fic. All I know is I am so glad I did!

I will have to commssion you some pervy pictures for this! P.L Nunn would do a great job of this I think.

In case you haven't heard of her...and I doubt that since everyone knows of Pam...here's the link to her site.

http://www.bishonenworks.com/
person ReaperRain
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God.
I would physically BEG you to continue this story if we were in person, but I'll just have to settle with pleading. PLEASE update quickly, because this is undoubtably THE best YamiYugi pastfic I've ever read, and I've read just about all of them. This had me hooked from the beginning, and now things are really starting to heat up, I'm on the edge waiting to see what will happen next. I've left my email address, so if you would be so kind, could you possibly alert me when the next chapter is out? Sory if that's asking too much. I really, really want to keep reading, because this story is, and I rarely give such a compliment, PERFECT.
person dragonlady222
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent story. I am so gald I found it. I just read the whole thing and can't wait for an update.
person Sanni York
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't tell you how happy I was when I first found this. I love the Ancient Egypt theme and Atemu's and Yugi's relation in them. Too bad there aren't so many, and if there is someone, it's too fast... too swift.
I stayed up all night to read this, I know, I'm a slow reader, but I truly enjoyed it. Your technique of writing. It's all so living and describing and yet not too much.
Oh, and the heated moments between them *shakes heads with a smile*, you really had to quit there, hadn't you? Yes, most evil of you. I hope you'll update soon and that it will qontinue where you left it. ;P

About your notes, do you write them with detail or do you just write the idea? I sometimes have a hard time to continue a fic, which I am disappointed with. I get an idea, start writing a few sides and then it dies. Have any tip? Love your story!

P.S. Sanni York is my pen name... Are one supposed to write one's true name...? *embarrassed*
person No10ne
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so good, I think my toes are stuck on curl! Oh you've got to finish this!
person gizmo
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story, it will be fun when its done, and if you add lemon would be nice.
//gizmo