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for Shadow Rising

by Khat

person kiyomi
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay for the update! Yes, I noticed the quote. That's my favorite quote from YGO TAS. That picture you referenced was cute too. Hopefully the next chapter will come a little faster, as I'm waiting for when Kaiba gets kidnapped. It would be refreshing for Seto to get kidnapped instead of his brother Mokuba.
person ayachan
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha, I'm definitely still reading! Sorry if I randomly miss review some chapters though... I'm kind of picky on my fanfics :P and some of the stories lately on ygo aff aren't the ones that I usually read, so I don't check ygo aff as much now. Anyway, I saw your comment on the bottom! Funny thing is that the first time I read Ch. 15 or.. 16?, where Seto totally ditches Set, I was confused and didn't know what you were talking about. And now I was just re-reading from Ch. 13 again (I totally don't remembered what happened, sorry >_<) and I totally knew what you were talking about this time around! Anyway, love the story and Set/Seto are still my favorite. I know I've told you this before, but I would prefer Seto just have Set for this story. Love Seto/Jou down to my bones, but it just doesn't seem right for this story. :) I'm interested to see what Nui's up to! And I wonder if Seto is ever going to get kidnapped... it'll be amusing to read Set's reaction when he totaly flips out over that.
person ayachan
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh crap! I'm totally getting old, but what quote??? Gahh, I feel so ashamed, since I LOVE yugioh the abridged series, but I don't recognize it :(
person Selena
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That's an interesting story you have here. Set and Seto stories are so hard to find and you write their relationship quite cool, although I feel really sorry for Kaiba at certain times.
And please don't do a threesome with Jounouchi. There are so many Kaiba and Jonouchi stories already and I don't think the world needs another one. Besides, Set and Kaiba have enough problems with each other, they don't need Jonouchi in between. It would just be too much (okay, there's also the problem, that I don't like Kaiba and Jounouchi as a pairing at all, but my other points still stand).
person kiyomi
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story. It's hard to find good SetxSeto stories. (or any, for that matter) Is Joey going to get involved with them? I personally wouldn't mind either way. Poor Kaiba, and the rest of the hikaris. Their yamis are pretty controlling. Especially in this chapter with Set and Seto. So will Yugi be the virgin Nui uses? That would piss off Yami and probably make him just as evilish as the other yamis. Anyways, please update soon!
person ayachan
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha, you're welcome.. but really? Wow, I don't remember leaving a comment like that. I was probably dying to find out Set's reaction- and now I have!!! And it was great- loved it! And as you can tell by now, I have completely no problems with you spending more time with Set/Seto :P But I liked the disappearances of the hikaris as well- that was very interesting! Can't wait to see what happens next. Nui's probably tearing his hair out in frustration to find a virgin, lol.
person Anon
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
for some reason, i knew that ryou was going to be taken first...WHAT IS NUI DOING TO THE POOR LAD?!? malik can take care of himself but ryou is too submissive. HE'S FRAGILE, I TELL YOU!!! but i love him just the same...oh PLEASE!!! what is happening to ryou and malik?!?!?!?!?!? waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!

ASOTA
person randomreviewer
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, poor Seto. Although admittedly leaving Set behind wasn't a very good move. Poor Ryo and Malik. I still wonder who the virgin sacrifice is going to be, considering that neither Ryo nor Malik are virgins. Maybe Yugi? Anyway, please update soon! ^.^
person Anon
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Anonymous Sister of the Author: I’m not quite sure which author you’re the sister of, since I’m pretty sure you’re not mine, cause one’s too young, and the other’s not interested in anime, unless you mean in a figurative kind of way, perhaps, like as in we’re all sisters and brothers and such, but that not being important, and entirely off-topic, yes, he is. The getting the yami pissed at him part, I mean. I can’t tell whether he’s going to die or not, because that would be spoiling things for other people. Hope this update was quick enough. ^___^"

OMG!!!! THAT WAS HILARIOUS!!! my actual sister has an account on fanfiction.net and not here, but i kept the same name...I LOVE THE REACTIONS THAT I GET OUT OF PEOPLE ABOUT THIS!! it's the highlight of my day!!! anyway...

i feel that the hikaris are treated like property, *sad*, even like slaves sometimes...they have to do everything their yami says or they get punished for it. THEY DO NOT DESERVE THE PUNISHMENT!!!! *determined* THE YAMI'S ARE CONCEITED BASTARDS THAT HAVE GOTTEN TO LIVE FOR TOO LONG AND ARE SPOILED!!!!! okay i'm done now... *serious* keep up the good work and update soon please!!!

ASOTA
person randomreviewer
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My new favorite pairing is now SetxSeto thanks to this story. I can't wait to see if Nui kidnaps the hikaris or something. Set is a bit of an ass in this story but that just makes his relationship with Seto more interesting. Do you know of any other good SetxSeto stories? Anyway, please update soon! This story is great. ^.^