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for Capture Me

by Rroselavy

person ...
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
.....*blush*.....oops....that anon. one is from me......yah, the one with the whole moving to the edge of my seat thing.......hehehe, guess i forgot to put in my name............but, great great great great story so far........i cant beleive that he fainted! (lol)...........that basement sounds awesome though *drool* (lol)...........i hope that seto and jou have fun^^ and i bet that jou is really enjoying his total and complete dominance of his dragon^.~.........i bet that seto won't regret not having a safe word, too^^............great chappie, *hugs* Ja ne!
person Terry
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL, he fainted! This is great. Talk about being excited. Can't wait to read the finale (although I'l be sad to see it go, this is one of the best fanasties I've heard of Seto having).
person Some Random Person
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Of course I’m still with you on this… the cliffies… they’re so delicious! ^_~ Anyway, another great chapter. I can only imagine what’s gonna happen next, and I’m giddy with anticipation for your next update.
person yaoi girl
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh men, you are awsome!!!!!!, i never think that in my head, yumiiiiiii, just ...well is a sorrow that we can´t see him like this in the anime, i have to tell you, this chapter put me hot.
my sweet se-chan finally have waht he want, and joey is doing a hell of a job.
person Silvershadowfire
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool! I'm finding this really interesting... more please!
person Anon
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
.....what?.....*moves to the edge of her seat quickly*......what happens next!.........come on! i /need/ to see what happens next!.......rroselavy, where are you! you just left us here with kaiba stuck in the trunk and then.......*calms down as she realizes rroselavy is just getting the next chapter ready*......never mind!^^.........for a second there, i thought that maybe you left and wouldn't return^.~.........great chapter, and im glad to see that jou's plan is finally under way^^.........keep it up *hugs*...........ill see ya next chapter^^.........loves & tootles!
person Starwarrior
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely fic! *grins* can't wait for the next chapter! Besides, I think you got a hold of the characters and what they are like. I'm not too sure about Tristan and Duke, but it seems to be a great fic. Keep up the good work!
SW
person puffin
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH WOW! This has gotten better and better with each chapter. Please update soon and keep up the good job on this story.
person yaoi girl
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fuck¡ you are cruel whit me, i has been expecting this since the first chapter, is not nice you know, i love when kaiba is the uke, end him been the uke in yhis way well you must know, grrrr, pleaseeeeeeeeee update soon, just one question , will honda and hiroto play whit kaiba too, or just joey?

and...well, how many toys they will use on him, ohhh my sweet dragon.
person Terry
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
IT HAS BEGUN! :D Thank you! Love the update! Jumping up and down for the next!