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for Not A Pretender

by gaijinchan

person subjunctivity
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
They're so funny the way you write them. Your portrayal of Kemo is fantastic.
This one reminds me of a teenage Kemo with Croquet as an adult 'friend'. (I hope that's not insulting)
Excellent story, as usual.

Happy almost 4th of July, by the way!