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by Jeanne

schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cute! I like the pairing alot actually
J-chan
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I know I read this somewhere else. Maybe Media miner? I really like it.
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great job. Yugi fought hard but the King of Games lost this one. But he won something more important.
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful lemon. I think they suit each other perfectly.
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very cute. Yami's reaction was priceless.
person Diva937
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was going to wait til I read it all to review, but this chapter warrents a review of it's own. It's one hell of an amazing first chapter. I especially loved the line about the dark side of the moon and the sun, and the part about the over protective pharoh banishing first, asking questions later... And Yugi liking being tied up? PERFECT start.
person Diva937
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, and to top it all off, you write a perfect Seto too! And Yugi "Stifling a delighted squeal" was probably the cutest thing I've ever read. Right in the middle of this sex scene, Yugi squeals... But it works. I really loved it!
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have loved this fic for years. Loved the site (Bakura/Yugi) Eclipse. Why hasn't something been done with it? I love the why you write Yugi. You just reminded me of the reason, why I like your writing, with your recent seme Yugi/Yami posted here. Please write more I've already read all your recommended stories, please add more of yours to that list. Pl`ease.
person neko_0
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i wonder if this is gonna be continued? i hope it doesnt end here.. please more.. u write wonderfully and i loved every single bit of it. update!!!
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! what is Yami going to say? can't wait to see the Pharoah so mad! lol

MiM
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