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for Still

by Kugatsu

schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sigh*

that was so precious. i can't stop smiling now. :D

loved it! you are my favorite ygo writer in the whole world. :D
person BlacKat
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LAST CHAPPIE! T_T -> GO RYUZAKI! Hey he kicked asses! :P and not just that! And for Haga too! He's defending Haga against idiots :principle included:! ^_^ Cool! Although Haga had to take some time getting use to after going through shit like that! I mean a preppy physcho almost raping you? Erghhh...and he gets the nerve to ask about Haga and saying there's no hard feelings and they can do it again! :barf: Hey atleast Ryuzaki gave it to him!
HAGAXRYUZAKI! May this pairing be forever and ever!...-_-cuz for one thing the seem right together...XP Great story and I can't wait for any new UPdated stories! I can't wait to see the last chappie for Summer Time Magic! I'll keep on R&R for your stories...-__- unless i die by some unexpected death or something...^_^ Ja ne!
person Wicabeth
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Ryuzaki kicked Rikuo's ass! *cheers*

That was a sweet ending. Can't wait for more! (Because I'm greedy like that XD )
person Anon
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so I'm a lazyass, and it took me this long to get to reading Still. Pfft. It definitely delivered in terms of great story and characters, as your writing always does. I really liked your OC, he was cool, but apropriatly hateable when the need arose, and Haga getting uncomfortable around him was so well written it almost made me squirm. You have a real talent for writing inner (and outer) turmoil. The ending was awesome, and I was happy to see them show up in the last chapter of Summer Time Magic as well. Which, by the way (sorry for forgetting this in my STM review) had the coolest ending, with Jou and Varon. Made me smile, as did the ending to this story.
person BlacKat
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When Ryuzaki asked Yugi for help...was it after Yugi came back from vacation on the islands? I still need to R&R for the last chappie of that one...-_- -> Oh well atleast he got his advice for Haga...
AAAAHHHHHHAAAAAA! I knew that preppy dude was nothin but bullshit!
“Oh you taste so good Haga! You’re my number one forever and always…” ewww that was just plain nasty and sound like it was coming from a fan-girl...fan-boy...?are there such things as fan-boys?
Next and last chappie! Ryuzaki to the rescue! Can't wait for the last and final chappie! ^_^ Ja ne!
person Wicabeth
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, Ryuzaki! Go in there and save your man! XD

*beats Rioku*
person velvetina
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I cannot believe you left it there. thats just pure evil!!! evil i tell u. anyways i g2g out now so longer review 2morrow.! Velvetina xx
person Ghost Dragon
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KICK HIS ASS REX! KICK THAT S.O.B. ;S ASS! Ring hs neck! RING IT! * Gets hit with a Fan by Soul Dragon *

SOUL: Clam down!

Ghost: But!

Soul: CLAM DOWN!

GHost: fine... DinoXBug lemon.......... why is that nasy btut kikny>

Soul: Your a Freck-leck

Ghost: Oh rigtht...... anyw UPDATE!
person hyaene
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
my firstreview here :3

great story! with my favourite characters *.*
I'm always looking forward to the next chapter. keep up the great work.