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Okay, why in the nine do I always put shy's name first when she goes last? *shrugs* Who cares.

Hi Lady Laran hun. Shy came out of her soul room long enough to read these two chapters and left a note for you. I agree 100% with her so I won't bore you by repeating what the baby one has slipped to me under her door.

"Ever so very shy hello's Miss Lady Laran and Mr. Muses Sirs. Um, I...I ever so very shyly loved these two chapters *giggles shyly* It...it is cavity enducing but...I shyly liked it anyway. Pretty shyly please you will write more shyly yes? Oodles of shy thank yous for...for writing."

Yep, that's what she wrote *chuckles* Aaaand, I totally agree. Yes, cavity inducing but fun to read. So do keep up the good work and take care kay?

Chow Mien for Now Mien

Yes it's sweet, and I love it. You've also satisfied the question of whether the hikari's are pining for their yami's with a definate no (I love it that they where good yami's and taught their hikari's what they needed to know about sex he he). Now I'm wondering if the two yami's might get together.

Having trouble picturing Yugi's hair, got any pictures? I can believe it needing shadow magic to keep it in place.

Oh this was SUCH a good chapter! I can't wait for the next one! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! MORE MORE MORE! I am going crazy!

I really like your story. Can't help it but yes, it was sweet! As you stated, sweet describes the two characters (Ryou and Yugi) all too well. I liked what you did to Yugi's hair. I have heard 'the do' being referred to as starfish head, porcupine head, ... running a blank now, naturally, but you get the idea! He has been cursed with a scary head of hair. I love Ryou. He is one of my favorites. I like how you are portraying him. Bakura, another blunt, in your face but loveable guy. Good work! Look forward to more!

Silver and all her muses except Seto: Awww! That is so sweet!
Seto: I think I agree with the cavities thing...
Silver: *ties up Seto and throws him in the corner* Don't mind the grouch. This is SO wonderful! I love it when these two get together, and the scene in the garden... *sighs dreamily* So romantic...
Seto: And sappy enough to send a diabetic into sugar shock...
Silver: Shut up Seto. Anyway, great chapter, and please continue soon! *huggles*

Silver and her menagerie

yeah, you caused me cavities, but that's not a bad thing. This pairing is supposed to be sweet, but they can be hot too... hehe.
I liked this chapter and I can't wait to read more.

*winces and let's Drac handle this one*

Great chapter sweety, but you already knew that. One muse is now really, REALLY worked up . . . the other two were laughing. Don't mind Kura . . . the 'other surprise' thing sort of caught him off.

Now then . . . *clears throat* MORE!!!!!

Drac and the Assembly

So sweet!

Cavities? Omg hon, that chapter gave me a sugar high I won't be off of for a week at least! Trelane says I've been grinning like an idiot the entire time I was reading... oh, and also thank you for giving her the idea to use shadow magic to do her hair! I can't wait to see what happens when Ryou finds out about the collar... please update this (and all of your other stories!) soon! Ja ne! --LG & Trelane

Wow such a good story! Pleae continue it. I just love this pairing, it's just so kawaii!! I think you put M/M/M on the summary. Who is it going to be?? And what about the collar? What is that for? I think I already know what for though... I'll just keep it to myself now. This is really great and has the potential to be something great as your other stories so please udpate soon! Ja ne! ^___________________^