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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this one. The concept of a dungeon is fascinating to me and this is certainly the best dungeon story I've read in a long time.
Your vagueness about this 'he' is very interesting, as it gives a little mystery to the story until (some) readers figure out who 'he' is. The comment about the tooth, too, shows your familiarity with the series.
Very nice!
Your vagueness about this 'he' is very interesting, as it gives a little mystery to the story until (some) readers figure out who 'he' is. The comment about the tooth, too, shows your familiarity with the series.
Very nice!
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Croquet was always my favorite of Pegasus' cronies(sp?)....Anyway, its...erm....full of pronouns....but other than that, I liked it. w00t, oral sex! Anyway, do another chapter.....