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by Aten

person UketoSetosSeme
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how you can start out a chapter all sad-ish then make it so hot in the end, but I am jealous of it. I can't believe Aten is already preparing for his death. He shouldn't be so negative. *gives him Egypt-related plushies to cheer him up* I can't waot for the hot lemony-ness in the next chappy. I am going to be looking forward to it so much! ^.^ *luff*
person MarikIshtar77
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHH! My head is hurting!!
*grabs the knife on the desk and starts randomly stabbing things*
Fucking Crusaders...man...nasty, narrow-minded, misguided FUCKS!! They really piss me off! They're fucking insane! IN-FUCKING-SANE!!! GAH!!!!!!!!
Okay...'nuff of that now. *sets the knife down* Moving right along now...

"Bakura crossed his arms against his chest and disappeared."
~*snicker* "I Dream of Bakura," season premier???

“No, I didn’t! You just want an excuse to grab my ass again!”
~ *insert insane laughter HERE* ~


Pharaoh, I suggest you become a stripper. THE MOST POWERFUL STRIPPER EVER KNOWN TO MAN!! BWA-HAHAHA!!
person MarikIshtar77
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Vera's such a perv! Gods, how rude of her listening in on Aten and Robbie! She must have actually liked it, otherwise she would have turned on some music or something. Hell, she could have fucking left too! What a nasty old battle axe...
Kick her out, Miranda!
Oh...yes... by the way...
I'm on my to strip search Dice-boy... *snicker*
person Kathryn Coll
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*snort* lock Vera in a room with Hayden. 'S all I gotta say.

“Daniel, don’t be such a drama queen!"
Pot. Kettle. Black.

"Besides, you know as well as anyone that once you fall off the horse, you have to jump right back on.”
She's never bred, has she?

“Daniel, I can’t turn her away.”
*snort* yes you can. It's called not letting the door hit her on the way out. It's really very easy.

With a grunt, he pushed the bed against the wall where Aten and Robbie’s bed was placed in the other room.
nice move!

“I love poking you with this thing.”
Wow, it's like Marik and his rod.

The depravity!
*laughs* Yay for depravity.

person Kathryn Coll
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
“Oh, come on, Hikari Ishtar, you’re bent over working in that garden? How could I NOT take advantage of the opportunity?”
“What?! I didn’t do anything! Besides, you’re bent in half! How can I NOT take advantage of the opportunity to grope you?”
*snickers* that'll teach him to sit while working in the garden

‘Adventures in Friendship’ was printed on the cover.
That title bodes evil....

Marik sighed. “I think I’m gonna be sick.”
I'd need lots of booze....

Marik snickered. “I could tell him there’s a one-eyed monster in there, but that may be worse than the whole ‘Trouser Snake’ thing.”
*laughs and starts singing the "monster" song*

Sheesh, Mokuba still hasn't married that girl? Dude, what is wrong with him?!

Lordy, Joey needs a clue about Hayden and Hayden... well you know. He never was one of my favorite characters.

Cool, no more high school bs for them!

“Well…well….well….Dice-Boy! I owe you money, Ishtar. Otogi does have a vagina.”
LOL

“Do you ever stop thinking about Bakura’s ass?” Tristan asked.
“Do you ever stop thinking about coffee?”
Tristan shrugged. “No.”
“Then there we go, Caffeine-Boy,” Marik responded.
*laughs*

“BUT I WANT MARIK BABIES!!!”
The blond yami snarled and jumped to his feet. “I wouldn’t stick anything of mine into you even if you were the last person on earth!”
Anzu smiled blankly. “Bakura-baby!!! I WANT BAKURA BABIES!”
Bakura shielded his crotch and backed away. “Not in your wildest dreams!”
*falls over howling* eewwwwww

*wipes tears from eyes and continues to laugh* weinies....

“I didn’t think it was possible, Ishtar….but…I think that killed my sex drive for the next….ten thousand years.”
*nods*

“Well, I never!”
*snort* liar.

person Iluvkenshin
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hyden(if misspelled) is out. Anuza is still crazy and annoying. Marik watching Bakura's ass.
And Robbie is still worried about Aten. Just another chapter of Bakura's Girl's cooked up mind.
So we are left off with Hyden's revenge on Seto; another family member of Robbie's will move
into Robbie & Aten's lives. Aria, Umi & son are enjoying life.

As a reader of Bakura'sgirl, I love every twist and turn what Bakura's girl comes up with.
I have a question for the author.
Are you going to have more lemons of Seto/Jou(especially), Marik/Bakura, Aten/Robbie and Malik/Ryou?
I noticed that Hyden still calls Jou daddy. I believe he still cares for Jou as a father. Even though
Jou failed to protect him. Will Hyden hurt Jou badly...who cares I know from you last posted you
are going to do some damage on Jou (I think that you have been playing with Marik plush toy...
have you?) I guess there going to be some angus and very bad things going to happen to
my favorite characters Aten, Aria, Jou and Robbie. Another question, are you going to pair
up Robbie's mom and daddy to Marik? I love to read a threesome with those three.
Can't wait this weekend for chapter three.

Lots of Love
person UkeToSetosSeme
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*hugs the many plushies* Thanks for the plushies, and I will try my best in college. *rubs my forehead* Could Anzu get anymore annoying? *shoots her and she comes back to life* Anyway, I can't wait to see all the fun plotness you work out in this story. *gives you plushies* That's for keeping me entertained for so long. ^.^
person MarikIshtar77
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH .MY .GODS...
Anzu is evil. That evil evil evil creature must learn to keep her weiners in her mouth. Er...that came out wrong...
Anyway... Poor Miranda! The nasty lady is on her way!
Nice comebacks Marik and Bakura! LOLOLOLOL!

*goes off in search of Otogi's elusive hoo-ha*
person MarikIshtar77
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SWEET! I like how this is starting. Lots of groping, lots of yami torture, and an evil cliffie! Awesome! I look forward to the coming chapters.
Atum: SNAKEY! I WANT TO SEE THE SNAKEY!
person UkeToSetosSe,e
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...It's been awhile since I reviewed. Anyway, great start to the new story. I am just as hooked at ever. *cuddles Kai* He is so adorable. I can't wait to see how things turn out. Oh, as for why I haven't reviewed, I was busy with school. I from high school this comming Wednesday, June 29th. I will be free and I will start college at the end of August. Anyway, I can't wait for the next update.