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I know Ryo inside is not liking what is going on. Why are not seeing it from his point of view? Is he totally under Yami's control?

Angel -Wahhhhooo! Go, Psycho Ryou, go! You the man, oh yeah! Your yami taught you well, I see! *snicker* So vindictive... so hateful... so cold... so totally fucking sexy.
MI77 -Glad I could help you out. Malik and Marik were also very fucking sexy. So... Did your muse enjoy getting manhandled by mine??? *shifty eyes*
Angel - *smacks MI77 upside the head and laughs* Goddamn, woman, you just made me snort coffee out my nose after reading that last remark. Now I feel like I'm drowning. I should deprive you of your speaking privlidges for a month just for that, or worse yet... I'll have Crash pop in and sing "Stayin' Alive" for you again. *evil laugh*
MI77 - O.O NOOOOOO! ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME?!?!
Angel -Oh yes... and there's nothing you can do to stop me.
MI77 - *pout* Even if I whimper??
Angel -GAH! NOT THAT!!!! You are evil, woman! EVIL!
MI77: *snicker* Awww... I think I found one of Angel's weakness. *evil grin*
Angel -There is little hope for this woman... always exploiting sexy guys like me. *sigh*

*shakes head* what a tangled web. i know those die did alot of bad things in life, but i hope the kids realize the past is over. yami is another story. great update but i need a nap. laterz girl!

wow..these past couple of chapters have been intense but i wouldn't have it any other way. They were very good and i'm excited for the upcoming lemon. I hope they discover what's wrong with Ryou soon...i hate seeing him this way.

yes im reviewing agian but i have a question is yami ever going to collect his propeerty his slave bakura . not that i like seeing bakura beet up or any thing i jus like it when you write like that. and since tech ly blongs to yami just wondering

Hey long time no see . this is a nice chapter keep up the good work and ignor the the flames . i thought that was what Fanfivtion was all about making up yor on version its not like your geting paid for it . I thought that was canon was for the people that get paid for it then it matters . any way keep up the good work.

wow. i hope someone realizes yami's control on ryou soon. i wanna him some sense into him but i know it's not his fault it's jsut so hard to realize... aria and aten both scare me when they go yami but oh well that's them. as for the flamer, well u handled it better than i did :) i love ur fics long but hey i wouldn't be coming back if i didn't :p waiting for hte next update!

holy hell i've missed alot... damn things are jsut out fot he frying pan and into the fire... and wahtever is worse than the fire! shudders* creepsville. wihs mm would damn well work already.

Marik and Bakura fucking Malik and Ryou's brains loose, that's the shit. Like I always say; bad boys need their toys.

*evil grin* The Pharaoh is just too hot when he's being a bad boy.