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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I certainly hope you didn't just kill Joey! After that great lemon too! Bad bad bad.
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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*snicker* Nice birthday books
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(MM IS BEING A FUCKING SHITHEAD SO I HAD TO POST MY REVIEW HERE)
oh yuck! Listen, take all the time you need to get better. This chapter did not have a lemon but it is still good! And I know I hated Kaldin for a reason! That-That- *screams in frustration* -brat!! On a side note I am halfway done with the drawing. Hopefully jsut in time for the final battle :) I jsut need to remember what color Atens eyes are ^^; I know I am terrible! Good chapter I hope thigns go well on your end *hugs* laterz!!
oh yuck! Listen, take all the time you need to get better. This chapter did not have a lemon but it is still good! And I know I hated Kaldin for a reason! That-That- *screams in frustration* -brat!! On a side note I am halfway done with the drawing. Hopefully jsut in time for the final battle :) I jsut need to remember what color Atens eyes are ^^; I know I am terrible! Good chapter I hope thigns go well on your end *hugs* laterz!!
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH god, poor Aten! That Vera.. dude.. she's WHACK! I hope Yami Aten eats her.
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bakura calling Ryou a dick, I love it! My muses and I almost shat ourselves laughing while reading that Marik/Bakura scene in the beginning. Marik's menopause remark.. damn, totally funny. Poor Ryou, being all possessed and shit. I'm surprised Yami (while controlling Ryou) has tried getting in Yugi's pants yet. I mean hell, I woulda!! *evil grin*
Anyway... no killing Kai, I'll send the Egyptian mafia after you if you do! *shakes finger*
Anyway... no killing Kai, I'll send the Egyptian mafia after you if you do! *shakes finger*
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally they know what's wrong with Ryo! Poor Ryo doesn't even know! I hope he snaps out of it before he kills his grandson.
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*smiles* glad u like it aten.
what can i say? i do not like Kal-whatever his name is. I still feel sorry for Hayden and I wanna help... but I also wanna ram his head into a wall until i get tired. his three 'lackeys'... i wanna do something sadistic. aria and bakura, well stubborness runs in the family. on a final note, when will someone figure out ryou is totalling not acting like himself? i wanna slap him then hug him... then bob him on hte head.
what can i say? i do not like Kal-whatever his name is. I still feel sorry for Hayden and I wanna help... but I also wanna ram his head into a wall until i get tired. his three 'lackeys'... i wanna do something sadistic. aria and bakura, well stubborness runs in the family. on a final note, when will someone figure out ryou is totalling not acting like himself? i wanna slap him then hug him... then bob him on hte head.
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I knew that card I slipped in Bakura's deck would help. *snicker* WAY TO GO BAKURA! That was some fancy card work when you pulled off that Magical Thorn/Card Destruction move. *insert giggling from the muses here*
Now I'm curious how Aten's deck will hold up to Marik's. I have a sneaky feeling though... very sneaky feeling... that the Winged Dragon of Ra will have its say in that duel. *shifty eyes*
Glad to lend my help!
*shuffles the cards*
Now I'm curious how Aten's deck will hold up to Marik's. I have a sneaky feeling though... very sneaky feeling... that the Winged Dragon of Ra will have its say in that duel. *shifty eyes*
Glad to lend my help!
*shuffles the cards*
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Oh my, it’s been a while since I last reviewed this fic and I’m really sorry. I promise I’ll try to review as often as possible come October since September’s a really busy month for me, okay?
On to the review, three words: OH MY GOD! I can’t believe the Itemri-Ishtar family is falling apart! I really feel sorry for Marik and Bakura since their past finally caught up with them. I think that the most painful thing that can happen to any parents’ lives is to have their children hate them just for being their parents don’t you think so too?
Another thing, I can’t believe you’ve actually made me dislike my favorite character, Ryou, because of what he did to Bakura. I wasn’t really expecting that you’d make Ryou as sort of a villain too, but that’s okay, it makes the conflict harder to solve! ^_^
I liked how you wrote Aten and Aria’s reaction over their discovery of their parents’ past (poor Marik and Bakura) and I think that their reactions are just understandable, especially in Aten’s case, as what Malik explained. However, in regards to Aria challenging her father, and saying that Bakura can’t beat her is bit cocky on her part. I’d still watch out for ‘daddy dearest’ if was her, since whether she admits it or not, I believe her skills are still from Bakura.
Finally, I hope you’ll give us a bit of information on how the “true Ryou” is doing while all this chaos is going on and if he had any idea on what’s been happening to his family. I still want to believe that Yami haven’t controlled all of Ryou yet and that sooner or later, the hikari would be able to do something about this. Also, I hope the yamis would realize how all that is happening is really suspicious, especially regarding Ryou’s actions as of lately…Yami’s really a jerk on using Ryou like that!
That’s all for now! Sorry for the rather short and actually ‘emotional’ review. I’m just cutting some slack from the usual formal type of review since I’m already fed up with writing tons of reports and case studies, which are really formal and boring. I hope you don’t mind me reviewing this way. See you soon! ^_^
On to the review, three words: OH MY GOD! I can’t believe the Itemri-Ishtar family is falling apart! I really feel sorry for Marik and Bakura since their past finally caught up with them. I think that the most painful thing that can happen to any parents’ lives is to have their children hate them just for being their parents don’t you think so too?
Another thing, I can’t believe you’ve actually made me dislike my favorite character, Ryou, because of what he did to Bakura. I wasn’t really expecting that you’d make Ryou as sort of a villain too, but that’s okay, it makes the conflict harder to solve! ^_^
I liked how you wrote Aten and Aria’s reaction over their discovery of their parents’ past (poor Marik and Bakura) and I think that their reactions are just understandable, especially in Aten’s case, as what Malik explained. However, in regards to Aria challenging her father, and saying that Bakura can’t beat her is bit cocky on her part. I’d still watch out for ‘daddy dearest’ if was her, since whether she admits it or not, I believe her skills are still from Bakura.
Finally, I hope you’ll give us a bit of information on how the “true Ryou” is doing while all this chaos is going on and if he had any idea on what’s been happening to his family. I still want to believe that Yami haven’t controlled all of Ryou yet and that sooner or later, the hikari would be able to do something about this. Also, I hope the yamis would realize how all that is happening is really suspicious, especially regarding Ryou’s actions as of lately…Yami’s really a jerk on using Ryou like that!
That’s all for now! Sorry for the rather short and actually ‘emotional’ review. I’m just cutting some slack from the usual formal type of review since I’m already fed up with writing tons of reports and case studies, which are really formal and boring. I hope you don’t mind me reviewing this way. See you soon! ^_^
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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa... what I would pay to be the person driving by when Marik wakes up... fucking yum! *evil grin*
Hmm.. looks like trouble's a -brewing bigtime. Bakura better win that duel! *slips Bakura a special card to help him win*
Hmm.. looks like trouble's a -brewing bigtime. Bakura better win that duel! *slips Bakura a special card to help him win*