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Not many YamixMokuba fics on the net. You should continue this; I like it. n_n Truth be told, I've had Mokuba play DDR in a few of my fics, as well. XD; He just seems like a kid who'd enjoy it.

I'm going to help you because I WANT TO READ THIS STORY!

Everytime you begin dialogue, it's a new paragraph. Please seperate the dialogue from teh paragraph! ^w^ It'll make it look longer! Lemme know if you choose to fix it so I can come read!


*loves alternate pairing fics*

*squeals* Another chapter!! YAY!! I can’t thank you enough for this!

And believe me short chapters are perfectly fine, especially since I was not expectin this much.

This chapter was so cute. Poor Atemu though, so many feelings and thoughts. Hehe this is goin to get good. *smiles*

This is an awesome story so far and I cannot wait for more. I shall be waiting for the next update. Can’t wait for more!

~Ice Angel~

Ok first off. Thank you so much! Thank you, Thank you, Thank you, Thank you, Thank you, Thank you, Thank you, Thank you!!! Your the best! Thank you so much for doin this pairing!

Ok now I can leave a review. This is awesome! I mean it, just so wonderful!

I defiantly hafta agree with Yami on the whole Mortal Kombat- I can't stand how long my step-bro's can play game.

Anyways thank you so much for doin this for me. And I cannot wait for more, from a wonderful writer like you. Anyways great chapter I absolutly love this fic so far. I'll be waiting for the next update.

~IceAngel~

Good. Kinda short but that's okay. I sent you chapter one of my story. Did you get it?