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i absolutely loved this story

I think that 'beautiful', 'emotional' and 'delicious' describe this sotry to a 'T'. It was a wodnerful story. Lovely and sad adn blissful and the happy-ish ending, it was great. Kudos on another fantastic piece of fiction Akuchan!

*melts*

Whoa, I was so happy to see this updated and finished, now I'm off to read more of your stories because I enjoy your writing style immensly. It was beautiful, and if you ever think of a sequel or continuation, you know I'll be right there to cheerlead you on. Oh, and as for the renovations..... -_-;;

*Trelane smirks* It's especially fun when I surprise her and drag her in there... we can be out of touch for hours...

*LG blushes scarlet and hangs her head* Umm... anyway... ah, great story, loved Jou's reaction when Seto came in during the epiloge, "Oh fuck me! Not again!" and umm, talk to you later!

Why aren't you updating?? You're killing me here.. here's a kitten to spur on your writing about the Kitten. =^..^= Update! ~LG

OMR... just read chapters 2 & 3... the first comment I had was wondering what the HELL could have been going through Honda's head, "Oh, hey, let's change what I've figured out is their signal and see what happens?" Flippin' IDIOT! Second, glad Mokuba's finally accepting their relationship, although it's a bit creepy that Seto started responding to /him/ as a Master... Third, Honda'd better get this obsession with Jou out of his head right quick... And holy wow, knew it was coming but /total mortification/ for Seto when he figured out who the second Master was! Oh, and I guess one more thing, my yami Trelane says "thanks," although I'm terrified to go into her soulroom now since she said she was 'redecorating' based on your dungeon description. -_-;; Why me?? Okay, please update soon, ja ne. ~LadyGrey (and an ecstatic Lady Trelane)

Ah, that was the last thing, another review reminded me, I also wonder about the line "Jou's contempt for Seto"... Is that what Seto's thinking, or are you really going down a bad road now and Jou really isn't going to forgive Kitten? And I agree too that it might have been a touch too soon for Jou to introduce Yugi; although the revelation that they're in a similar situation is recent and they haven't discussed it yet, Jou could/should have figured out that would be another hard boundry, at least initially, for his Kitten. Okay, your story's kept me from working long enough tonight, ja ne!! ~LG

Wow.... I had my doubts at first, but OMR... I only have time for Ch. 1 tonight, but I'll definately be reading further and reviewing often. I seriously jumped out of my chair when Yugi and Honda saw him -- I even figured it was coming, but it was /such/ a jolt. Well written. Neat story. Of course, if my yami ever gets her own body, you've just given her the blueprint for how our relationship will change.. S'okay tho. Ja ne! ~LG

Definitely worth the wait. I do, however, feel sorry for Seto. Though, he does deserve punishment, I don't know if it's really a good idea to bring Yugi in on the game right now. Later, sure, but it's a little sad that all Seto can think about now is Jounouchi's contempt for him. And no safe words? I know they're hard-hitters, but it seems a little irresponsible of Jounouchi. But I look forward to the next part, 'cuz it really is very, uh, interesting.

*glomp* Oh...it was definitely worth the wait...now I'm waiting for the next part of it. Great work.

Maggiemay

Jou's contempt for Seto? He asked YUGI over??? NO! NO! NO! *scream muffled into hand* Poor Seto! *wail* I wanna kick Jou's shins in for this- he better have a damn good reason or Seto SHOULD leave him.