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Wow, this is still great! I can't wait to see what Yugi's gunna do with this information... ;) You update so quickly. Kudos!

None of this is helping my sexual tension, dammit XDD And, daaaaamn, Ryou's a sexy little thing when he's demanding. Rar.

But, I can't wait to see Yugi ride Marik "like an animal". *hentai grin*

Yippie new chappie! ^_^ -> :P

THANK YOU for the lemons! The Bakura/Seto lemon was pretty short but it was still a lemon!^_^ AND THANK YOU for the really REALLY nice Dartz/Ryou lemon!^_^

I know I already said this about Malik and Otogi but I just want to say this for all the characters in your story...PLS DON'T LET ANY OF THE CURRENT PAIRINGS BREAK UP! T_T OR CONSIDER TO BREAK UP!...

Sex on the Beach!~...~...!...R they serious?...I think I'll stick with the alcohol for now :P

Can't wait to see more of Jou/Honda, Raph/Peg, and Yami/Amelda :P

:P Ahh Mokuba and Mako are finally here...?...Ryouta?...that his Japanese name?...-__- whatever...moon god?...:P I think Ryouta is more of a Sea god but whatever rocks your boat, ^_^ either ways he'll be a god in my eyes :whenever he's wet and shirtless :P : So anyways can't wait for the relationship to progress...wonder what Seto might think of this?...:P wonder if he'll kill Ryouta the first chance he can get :P

So anyways great chappie again and can't wait for the next one! ^_^ UPdate as soon as you can!

I just absolutly have to say that your're amazing...i love your fics so much! I thought i had read them all but it totally made my day when i clicked on your name and discovered two more! I love your conversations and think that should a yaoi series be made yours should be right up there at the top! I have all your fics saved on my comp and read them every so often for a good laugh (and cry sometimes!) It's not too often an author is keen to go beyond the 'normal' pairings and i swear if i have to look at another jou/seto fic i'll scream (although they do kinda fit sometimes!) I love your fics! Please please please please please please write heaps more! I'll even pay you *reaches for empty wallet* Err well i would if i had money but..err...*hands monopoly money* that's all i've got! Wow i can't stress enough how great these are! My absolute favoriet yu-gi-oh fanfiction in the WHOLE universe!!! Oh and i just loved Tegami, i thought it was wonderful that Ryou finally got some love after looking after those bloody Yamis all the time! Ooh and i love all your Marik/Bakura interaction! Ooh and your Bakura/Seto stuff...ooh and (Christ this is a huge review but i just can't sing you enough praises!) Please update soon! I wish that i had been reading fanfiction when you first strated writing so i could have commented on each chapter as it came out but i'll just have to settle for smushing it all into 1 BIG review!

Your're great! And keep writing!

Hellagoddess

Ohh! This chapter was just sooo yummy!!
ME LIKES THIS KIND OF RYOU A LOT!!!
So pervy and.. hum... *drooly*
And the part with Bakura and Seto... that sure is possessiveness.. but a thief is always possessive of their properties, right? :P
So sad about Malik though.. Be nice to him!
And finally one fic where Ryuuji is not just a part of the scenario! (my second fav character, after ryou!)
Hope to read another chapter soon enough!

RD: jeeze now theres a combo id never thought id see Shwarz mokuba and mako well at least this time he wont get dumped in a wrotten manner Mako is honor to the core as long as mokuba dosnt mind him going on and on bout the sea but other then that hes a good guy at heart heh huh and yami the key factor about yugi is that you just wont agree with his life style back before u betrayed his trust in u u swore never to go against his wishes but u did just that first u broke into his private matters matters that have nothing to do with u or nyone else and if u forgot he did love you once yami but u made it dead clear u didnt care for him that way u want him to show u affection then stop treating him like hes nothing and stop mocking his relationship if u truly care for him let him do what he wants to do and keep no beafs bout who he hangs out with its who he prefers deal ok at least THEY have proven they can keep yugis trust heh u guys have to do the same only this time no freebees u have to earn it back only then will u be able to meet each other half way hmph u just dont seem to get that yami you broke yugis trust in u its the same as breaking the bond u have and those scars will never fade nor will he forget how poorly you hve been behaving in regards to his social and love life but the big thing of all yami is stop living in the past yes it was important in order for u to save the world and everything but its been saved its locked down good and tight now shadow realm no maniacle freaks after u or the world or w/e so its done the past is the past and it belongs were it belongs behind u put the pharaoh aside and be who u are now and teenage boy with a life school to go to and friends to hang out with and peoples lifes to amend for u impromper way of treating them huh well now that im done chewing yami out keep up the great work shwarz an update soon gtg now JA NE ^__^

You know what Schwazie? you never sieze to impress me!! *grins like a manic Malik on a psycho day!* UPDATE SOON BUDDY!!

I like Noa and Mokuba, Mobua and Mako, Mokuba and Duke, hell anyone with Mouba works! Yuki sould just fuck Yami and get it over with. Ryou sould do Bakura and Seto just from the hell of it

Pegasus taking Rapheal? I never saw that coming, I was thought Rapheal would take Pegs, but hey it was hot!^__^ Update soon dudeit! oh and Malik and Varon? GOD YES! or Jou and Varon.. HELL YES!

*pants..* That was.. really hot.. *fans self*

I like the idea of Noa being related to Dartz. And I was hoping you would put him in here somewhere!

And the scribbles on Malik made me giggle. *^-^*