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RD: hey at least for the first time hes hanging out with yami thats something but yes *smacks malik upside the head* bad malik u need to go u go in the bathroom not even on a private owned beach i doubt even the ocean can clean that up easily huh bad malik but other then that the rest was cute hehe huh ppls should know by know WARNING WARNNING hikaris eating sugar is a NATION WIDE CATASTROPHE AVOID THIS AT ALL COSTS ty heh exactly and its a warning all should heed wel shwarz u know the dril update soon and keep up the great work while i work on my typing huh well gtg now JA NE ^_^

*laughts so hard she cannot speak*
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hahahaha
im laughing so hard now my stomach hurts
i wishi was a boi so i could do wot malik did
update soon
its great
im glad mokuba found some1 now da hot fisherman just has 2 like mokuba bk

LOL! I think I'd get diabetes if I ate to much sugar in the morning to start my day :P

Looking at Mokuba's I don't think it didn't start so well for him...if it's a Ryouta/Mokuba pairing will it be one sided cuz from what you've written it looks like Ryouta isn't interest, but Mokuba has like a crush on him or something...!...!^_^ This just makes me want to read more on this pairing! :P Wonder who'll make the first move?...

I laughed even harder when the Hikaris' were convincing their Yamis to help them build a sand castle. -__- I didn't get it at first on how Malik destroyed Yami and Yugi's buildings but when I read the part that he "finished relieving himself and pulled his trunks back up, turning and kicking the sand back like some sort of cat using the litter box" XP Crap I think I almost died laughing! Good ending too...I almost forgot that Yugi always liked to throw alarm clocks when he's angry at ppl XP Wish I could throw an alarm clock at ppl...

^_^ So anyways great chappie and I can't wait for the next one! ^_^ UPdate as soon as you can!

Hey!! Please continue just to let you know.that was hillarious Yugi wanting an alaming again? oh brother....

ROFLAO oh god, 'My sand kingdom for a alarm clock!' i'll be honest i did get what marik did until i reread it. eew!! but still very funny ^^

I read the whole thing through. Hilarous. I once again like the references to alarm clocks. I didn't stop howling with laughter. But Yami is a sick pervert with the way he thinks of yugi. Remember When Yugi and Ryou were Malik in chapter 9. It would make a nick YugiMarik lemon. Just a suggestion.

Lol that was just too funny. The hyper Hikaris are the cutest thing in the world...I want one...better yet i wanna be one!!!!! that would just be too much fun. Anyways my fave bit was where the Hikaris jumped the Yami's. The Mokuba bit was pretty sad, I feel for the kid, I do, I too like an older guy and he doesn't notice me. Aww I'm sure it'll go right in the end though. Can't wait for more of your greatness xx

Damn... I WANT TO GO TO THIS BEACH! It's not fair! anyway.. YEA MAKO AND MOKUBA! U know I just thought of somthing.. would this like Rkelly and Miclel jackson?( Sorry to all of thier fans) O.O ...... Errrr forget i said that. ANYWAY! UPDATE SOOn!

*squels happily* yay lemons and double yay mako made it!! i seiously think he and mokuba would make a very cute couple ^^ more more more!! ooh plz tell me ur gonna doa lemon between hte two also!! :)