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for Summer Time Magic

by Kugatsu

person Wicabeth
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If this is starting to go how I think it is.. *twitches with happy glee* Because, even if Jou was an ass before, he still needs a happy ending of his own!
person ShadowofLight
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ROFLAO omg that was funny!!! hee you think marik would know better huh? oh short but good. i feel sorry for jou but it's like how that saying goes 'what goes around comes around' so shizu whatever is a dyke? well duh every guy she wants is either gay or taken. either way she's stilla slut. hmm what's next on the agenda? will jou find love? and it better not be mako! sorry i don't know all hte original names yet ;-;
person Velvetina
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOT cool chappie and I loved Yugi beating Marik with the flip flop, to funny. Yes I got the ArkLad, thing I'm smarter than folk think! Just so you know I'm going away for three days (mon-wed) so I wont be here to review. I havn't abandoned you!! Anyways as ever I am in awe of you and pray you never stop writing. Velvetina xx
person ShadowofLight
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squeals* ooh hot hot hot!! i seriously think mokuba found someone to treat him right ^^ so he's older point being? mokie's willing ;) bum starfish now i get it!! those things are cute and really something else :) i love ur fic i absolutely love it!! buy honda hope you get hit by a car! ... you know, i think i'm gonna go for a drive. *grins evilly*
person Wicabeth
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, that was pretty hot on the boat. But man, Honda is a fucking asshole! *beats him*

And that thing with the starfish definitely had me giggling. *snirk*
person Velvetina
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww truely awsome, although I'm not entirely sure about Mokie and the fisher guy after all he just came across as a bit too prevy this chappie...I'm not being mean just saying, eek I hope I havn't make you angry. Anyway the best part was the 'BUM' bit hehe poor starfish though, just too funny had me rolling around in laughter. Aww poor Jou, how could Honda do that too him? Whats Jou gonna do. Argh so many questions! Lol Love it! Velvetina xx
person BlacKat
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yippie! Another chappie UPdated! :YAY!:

Hope Mokuba can deal with Ryouta. You actually put Noa as Dartz cuz...cool! I giggled for awhile on there conversation :P

Poor Malik and Otogi! I'll support their relationship all the way to the end! :MALIK AND OTOGI 4EVER!:...-__-Hopefully they can work out their probs and be a happy couple again! T_T

JOU! He's been treated wrong his whole life! WILL HE EVER FIND TRUE LOVE!...:P Well hopefully he'll have a happy ending with someone! So I guess Ryouta is gonna talk to Jou for awhile...

Not to annoy anyone or anything but I like to point out again that Varon is still straight! Eghh...I just want to say that because I don't see him a lot in your stories :only once in awhile: ... so when will we be able to see him?

LOL! Again thanxs for the lime and lemon scenes! I laughed where Marik was trying to get Yugi! :P Yugi just threw Marik's flip flops into the ocean! hehehehe...

So anyways again great chappie and I can't wait for the next one! ^_^ Update as soon as you can! Oh and can't wait to see the next chappie for STILL! ^_^ Ja ne!
person BlacKat
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Again another funny chappie to laugh about :P lol...nice title for the chappie too :P...I cracked on the part where there was a starfish on Ryou's bum :P

Wow some couples are going through a rough road rite now...hope they can make it through T_T especially Malik and Otogi T_T

Thanxs for the lime/lemon scenes especially with the Raph/Peg scene :will Raph mostly be the one on top when they're together?XP just wonderin...when can we see more of Peg-chan on top? XP:
I couldn't believe my eyes when I read the part about Mokuba and Ryouta, I thought it was hecka HOT! :P For a thirteen year old, Mokuba likes to talk dirty :P hehehe...and Ryouta :jeez: another pervert in the story... the more the merrier! the more perverts the more humor!...Again I wonder what will happen when Kaiba finds out and what the others will say when they find out WHO Mokuba's doing it with...lol ^_^

Oh wow Honda's gone...^_^:screams and shouts of joys in the backround: never really liked in the story since he abuses Otogi :looking for a knife to kill Honda with...j/k rather put him in a pit of rabid fan-girls of Otogi O_o now that's a horror...So what will happen to Jou now? I'm starting to like Jou now in the story since he isn't acting that much of an asshole and he actually asked Kaiba to throw Honda out :SIGN-YOU GO JOU!:! T_TSah ne what will happen to him now?...

May I remind the ppl that Varon is still probably the last remaining male that is STRAIGHT!...just wanted to point that out ^_^

Again great chappie and a hilarious one too :P Can't wait for the next chappie! ^_^ UPdate as soon as you can! Ja ne!
person Wicabeth
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
JUST. DIES. LAUGHING....

I could hardly breathe a bit ago, I was laughing so hard XDDD
person NJ
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*bursts out laughing* Hikaris on a sugar high! Priceless! :D