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HHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! I'm laughing so hard its difficult to type!! and that thing with Anzu??!!! Oh hell good!!! Thats fucking funny Dude...SWEET!!! You have gotta to Update soon!!! man that was funny!!!

*squeals at thought of lemon* Eee! Wonder if Yugi's gonna make good on that information Malik let slip? ;)

RD: ROFLMAO omg that was fucking hilarious and WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT GOOOO YUGI hehe he really went all out didnt *tears of pride in her eyes* im so proud hehe and go hikaris that was kick ass hilarious fear the hikaris tremble in absolute fear mwahahahahaha hehe well schwars beautiful chappie per usual u simply must update as soon as possible hehe i want to read more i have to read more hehe gtg now JA NE ^__^

Oh my Goddesses! This fic was so funny it made me laugh so hard tears came to my eyes! I read your other fics and I especially liked the one where Ryou and Dartz hooked up (can't remember the name off the top of my head). Please keep up the awesome work! ^^

god that fuckin' HILARIOUS w/Anzu

Fourth of July really has really tired me out! And I'm still up pass midnight T_T I'm so tired! Well since theres a problem with my sleeping habits I need to type this review as quick as possible...or just write things...random things...
^_^Again may the ppl make it through their troubles and bull...especially Jou who I think should have better taste in guys :coughHondacough: and settle with someone maybe like...Varon or someone that's a guy :I thought of Varon since he's the only straight guy left and he needs to get paired with a guy fast!: ; and to Yami/Atemu who needs to get over his obsession with Yugi...or just talk with his probs with Yugi or somethin T_T
T_T Oh and poor Mokuba! He'll never see Ryouta...in...I don't know how long really :sweat: hopefully not that long, unless something unexpected happens...yeah...
WARNING WARNING! TO THOSE WHO DON'T KNOW THE DANGERS OF GIVING A HIKARI SWEETS AND DON'T WANT TO FIND OUT DON'T GIVE IT TO THEM I REPEAT DON'T GIVE THEM ANY SWEETS OR FACE THE CONSEQUENCES!...thank you^_^~random thoughts XP
Ok so anyways great chappie and I can't wait for the next one1 ^_^ Update as soon as you can! ^_^ Ja Ne!

aaw how sweet. poor jou and mako and mokuba. relationships hurt... but i wouldnt know never been in one. nice but i need sleep nights!!

RD: *glomps Amelda* THANK YOU god thank u someone finally gave it to Yami straight up his god dam ass sheesh u pompous arrogant STUCK UP MORON OF A PHARAOH maybe if u DIDNT treat ppl to quote one the phrases Otogi keyd into ur car "like ppl are potato chips" then u WOULDNT BE IN THIS MESS U MORON BUT U MADE UR BED NOW U CAN DAM WELL ROT IN IT sheesh ok read my petite pink lips nimrod y-u-g-i LOVES MARIK end of story thats all she wrote period bye bye LATER STUPDID huh hehe nice touch with the bon fire and beach loving marik never thought u had it in ya hehehe and i see at least Kaiba and Katsuya can agree that Honda is a fucking piece of shit for trying to put the moves on Maliks lover of all people sheesh whats wrong unihair cant get enough on ur own so ya got go all prostitute on peeps and steal whoever u want to steal well not in this lifetime honda this time uve got me to deal with *grabs honda by his neck slams him into the wall and beats him to a paulp* that should do for now huh well Shwarz keep up the great work and update soon gtg now JA NE hehe and sry if me shouting busted some eardrums but im getting sick and tired of yamis pompous braine dead excuse for an attitude if he wants yugi to like him more in the hikar yami sense then hes GOT TO STOP BEING THE PHARAOH ND START BEING A REGULASR TEENAGER sheesh

*cracks up* Man, the end to that chapter was funny! Gah, it's so weird to come back and find tons of updates. I remember 'back in the day' when I'd review every chapter... funny I had more time at school to do that then I have now that I'm on break. Maybe that's a bad sign.

Loving your writing, as usual and as always. Can't wait for Yugi/Marik next chapter, they're still my favorite pairing. I've actually had to go and do some digging to find out who some of the characters you keep bringing up are, since some of them are really out there. You're the first writer who's ever made me never watching this show something of a problem when it comes to characters. Luckily, you can find anything on the net. Nice to get more citrus, most of it was hot, though I really liked the Ryouta/Jou lemon. It wasn't particularly hot, mostly sad. It's nice to get more insight into Jou's character, he's becoming more important than I would have originally thought.

I also like seeing Seto, just hanging out and being around other people. It's a side to him most don't write, and many screw up when they do write. Then again, that seems to be your specialty, eh? I wonder what's going to happen with Mokuba, it's hard to see where you're going with that, and I'm also curious to see how Malik and Otogi will fix things, if they do. Peronally I hope they do, but whatever works is cool. Sorry 'bout the absence. ^.^

You didn't think I would leave you did you?! That chaper with Mokuba and Noa was WAAAY funny!!! Gods you are sooo hilarious lol anyway UPDATE SOON buddy!!