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i'd love to read more from this universe! MORE!!!!!!

i do believe this is one of my favorite yugioh arcs out there.

Squi! There's gonna be another and I can't wait! ^.^ The ending was fantastic, I loved the dancing. A lot of people try the dancing thing and they're all very similar, but yours was different, great. It was good to see everyone getting along and switching partners, and Ryou showing up going, "Where's my yami?" right after Dartz realized it wasn't Ryou with Malik and Yugi made me laugh my ass off. I've always wanted to see someone play on the striking similarities between yami and hikari. Seto and Bakura was HOT, extremely hot, and I've been wondering, has Bakura ever told Seto he loves him? Don't remember him ever doing so, and it wouldn't surprise me if he hasn't. Again, tons of love for your use of characters most never dare to write, and the ease with which you depit pairings almost anyone else would fuck up if they even attempted. *hugs* I lurve you!

awww, I so like your Bakura/Seto parts. They rock.

Greets
Kat

RD: ODLG if those hikaris get hyper while on sugar id hate to see them in a drunken stupor im sure it wont be pretty huh hehe wel Schwarz keep up the great work and update soon and at least yugi is starting to get a lil bit more friendly with Yami but no offense to those who like but blah on the idea of Weevil and Rex together *shudders* after being the bane of yugi and jous careers in duel monsters sry but i can only feel slight and i mean SLIGHT sympathy for those two Rex wasnt so bad just a moron but Weevil down right fucking twisted doing all that cheating and look were that got him hes lucky Yami didnt send his sry ass to the shadow realm hmph well gtg now JA NE Schwarz keep up the great work and update soon

ONE more chappie? COOL! :P

Oh well Mokuba can have someone to love now...although it was pretty hot with Mokuba and Ryouta...now its MOKUBAXNOA! XP man Noa got a potty mouth!...for a pre-teen jeez what's the fanfiction world coming too?

Atleast I got to see the conversation with Ryuzaki and Yugi...I laughed at the advice Marik gave but I'd choice the one that I could do! hehehehehe...

HOPEFULLY Kaiba and Bakura can get their acts straight and get back together again...I'm guessing it won't be for long since they are desperate for each other...I grinned at the part where both Bakura and Kaiba sneezed because they were thinking of the other! ^_^

I was surprised to read that Varon FINALLY popped up into the story! SO he's still straight, he's dating Mai, and the only available guy that is lonely and needs attention would be JOU! XP So whoever you stick Varon to when he becomes bent I'm cool with anyone ESPECIALLY if its Jou! ^_^

^_^ So anyways a LOVELY chappie and I can't wait for the...LAST...AND FINAL...CHAPPIE...T_T that's just sad!...->...^_^ UPdate!

O.o GO NOA! I knew he was lill whore I knew it! anyway Varson sould get hooked up with the cutie blonde JOU! Yay! but I wanted to to see mOkuba and Mako... Y.Y ok well... Noa and Mokuba is better! I hope you make a new storyline for this 'Kimi ga iru' I really love your style!

*fans self* Your Yugi and Marik are so hot XD (even if I don't pair them myself!) Dammit, people are making me like kinky!Yugi XDD


And damn... Noa's a little cock tease, ain't he? C.C

i'd love to see more seto/bakura interaction! *hinthint* overall i think this is a great fic and can't wait to see more stories from this universe.

Holy shit! Ryou's a nympho!
Gorgeous. I love the way Bakura is portrayed. And the nicknames! 'Puff' made me giggle. :D

RD:*blink* *blink* BAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAH OMG that was hilarious i never knew those hikaris could be so vulgar hehe its beautiful simply beautiful well Schwarz keep up the great work and update soon gtg now JA NE ^__^