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Yippie! New chappie!^_^Poor Ryou not seeing Dartz for 3 weeks!...he needs to get laid X3

Sahhh...how the hell did u come up with Espa and Mokuba? That was really unexpected but really I would have never have thought of THEM together!...o well its fanfiction! anything can happen! SO wat does Mokuba have to do for Espa? and Espa's last boyfriend was Haga:shudder: that sounds so creepy its making my skin crawl...:P and Mokuba's just 13!...how old is Haga?...same age?-_- wat a perverted mind for Espa to have...lol makes me want to read and learn more about this blossoming relationship=P for one thing i think there going WAY to fast in their relationship... o well it makes me more interesting atleast!^_^

...Beach party!^_^ ahhh a relaxing day at the beach! reminds me to take a vacation soon! :P wish i had a hot boyfriend to spend a day at the beach with! :sigh: how lucky can u get when ur an anime character with a bishie boyfriend!X3

Sahhh...anyways great chappie again and I can't wait for the next one! And if you get flamed from some anonymous review...DONT LISTEN TO THEIR CRAP! CUZ THEY ALL HAVE STICKS UP THEIR ASSES AND CAN'T GET IT OUT!...sahhh...i think those ppl need to think outside of the box and open to new possibilities!...and if they can't...they all need brain surgery! and I'll personally do it for them! :mwuahahahahahahahaha...: ^_^->XP
^_^UPdate soon!

Yeah, everyone is sad... except for Bakura and Seto. Man, I loved Bakura's reaction to the Mokuba Espa thing, that was great. Nice to see Marik and Yugi doing well together too. Great two chapters man, only thing is, I'm a little confused as to how much time has passed since the pool party the story opened with. Oh well, wonder they were, can't wait to read more. 'Night!

AHAHAAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA...-_-...^_^...:P...Sahhh; if your going to make a next chappie for this story I say Update!

Hello friend.Great story as all of the others you've writen.You are very talented and i hope*prey*that you write more soon.E-mail me if you ever feel like it.

*covers eyes* the horror!! i'm blind!! *runs into wall* ow! ugh poor guys... not all relationships can be swet as sugar. gotta hate that. but u write so well!! *hugs and dances around*

eek all the arguing *tears up* its all so creul...and so damn readable. Mokuba and espa....eep! Lol another great zany pairing. I love it as always. I will leave a longer review next time but I just have so damn much work to do right now! Velvetina xx

Yippie! A new chappie!^_^ I thought u were just gonna leave it at the first part of the story!-_-My mistake...so anyways again can't wait for the next story!^_^Cya!

*gasps* Omg I'm laughing so damn hard, its well difficult to type...bwaahahahahaha I just ahve this image in my mind of Marik's face before Malik jumps him and it sets me off all over again. Mwahahahahahaha.... hahahaha...dam I think I burst something I laughed so hard, my tummy hurts lol. I loved it so much and Yugi throwing shoes instead of an alarm clock, *snicker* I loved Seto spraying Dartz and Ryou, dear old Bakura really has made that lovely boy loosen up and its done wonders for him. Awww in an odd way I feel sorry for Mokuba, he IS being a bti of a brat but he just ain't used to sharing Seto, not to mention he's prob. in love with Bakura himself, wouldn't you be? lol. Anyway LOVE IT!!!! Velevtina xx