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Poor Malik *give him cuddles* And that water fight had me giggling

*chuckles some at your notes* That will be if I ever finish with the piles of papers I have from my summer class ^^; Feel free to write a story if you'd like, I won't feel offended or overshadowed or anything *^-^*

Oh! And I'm cheering for Bakura for kicking Espa's ass *whoot!*

Sorry I haven't Reviewed in along time, my net was down. But I loved your other storys, don't pay any mind to want people say about your story. If they an't got the balls to put thier name and not n00d or whatever it is then they and brun in hell.

On to a better note, I like how you had Bakura stand up for Mokuba when Espa tried to do that to him, that kick ass! But a pairing I think that would just mke Seto really mad, is a Jou and Mokuba. I mean what better way to get Seto from dumbing him for Bakura. Get the Little bro! Talk about drama.

Oh I kinda like Tea, only when she not bicthing about the friend ship things, so I can't say I miss her, but I would loved to see her dead! ^__^

Can't wait till i see the nect chapter....


Later days. Dragon,Ghost

Well, I have never reviewed before, but I decided that since you felt that some of your other reviewers had stopped reviewing, I decided to "step out of the darkness".
Firstly,I really, really enjoy your stories. The only thing that I would complain about is how stupid you make Malik seem at times--and that's only because I'm an avid Malik fan. I'm always looking forward to a new chapter of one of yours stories--coming online to see another chapter that you worked hard on, and put up, just brightens my day. I think it takes alot of motivation--which I myself am lacking--and talent to be able to post one chapter after another. I myself can hardly update within a week. Not only do you update fast, but the quality of the chapters are amazing. There are few times, if any, that I have seen any kind of grammatical errors or spelling errors. I'm glad you managed to keep the whole "universe" of Kimi ga Iru (I spelled that wrong, I know) alive after so long. Everytime a new part to the "saga" ends, I am always delighted to see a new installmet. To be frank, I am always amazed on new levels with your writing and your creativity. With each new chapter, you never cease to make my day. Thank you, and please keep writing~!

*rubs chin thoughtfully* I love...how real this is. ^_^; Just...it's amazingly funny sometimes, and at others it makes me want to cry. No story before has made me feel like it was as "real" as yours...I love how the characters don't always get along, and how sometimes when they hook up/befriend others, it's completely unexpected...not canon, I think it might be called. This chapter (5), made me laugh a lot and I think it was real good. ^____^ I'm uberly confused as to what they can do with balloons...*ponders*

I feel bad about how Yami and Yugi aren't closer...like how Marik and Malik are, and Bakura and Ryou. But then again...I like how Yugi hangs with the "bad" crowd and fits so well in there even though he's good, and I don't think it'd work as well if him and Yami were closer. I realize that makes no sense...but...it's how I feel. XD

I also find it hilarious how Yugi and Malik fight over Marik. XDXD

Ahh...*swoons* There's so many things I like about this story and find so creative and original that it'd be impossible to name them all. ^__^ But...whoever that n00b was is an ass who should be shot. >< The only reason I can see that he wouldn't like your story is he's a homophobic. *shrug*

Ahhh I loved it so much, my fave part was totally the last bit...Ryou is more evil than any of us knew...well I guess it couldn't all have been Bakura lol. Awww Mokies become attatched to Bakura that is just too cute and the way that Bakura defended Mokie was adorable. Btw I've reccommened to loads of ppl I know to read your work, I hope they review...but just incase they don't I have done it lol. I actually felt sorry for Jou in this chappie, all he wanted was for Honda to notice him, and did he ..NO. Stupid Honda, doesn't appreciate what he's got. Anyway Update soon!

Sahhh...hey don't worry bout the guys with the negative reviews and stuff, but i'd get piss too if someone screamed and said bull to me...:shrug: actually I ALREADY understand and know that!...don't worry about that i mean the world goes round and some people in the population DO have sticks up their @$$&$...and their are some ppl who are TOTALLY obsessive fanatics...u know what i mean rite?

So anyways back to the reviewing great chappie! I totally cracked when Malik compared the heat to "hotter than a fat woman's underarm" and i asked my sister if their really was something like that and i laughed at my sister's expression!^_^ Jeez Bakura and Marik scaring the kids in line, hehehehe even Yugi scared a girl cuz she pointed at his hair :P

I can't really say Honda, Jou, and Yami are bad guys in the story cuz i hardly ever seen them in the story, BUT then again they did acted like @$$&$ in the first story...^_^...:P hopefully they'll change soon rite?...and wat the heck happened to ANZU?...i mean to clear things i don't like the girl:i don't even like her in the anime/manga either...: but then i don't see much of her with Honda, Jou, or Yami...did somethin bad happen to her or somethin, cuz if thats the case... :mwahahahahahahaha...:^_^ So wats gonna happen to Yami/Amelda and Jou/Honda?...Are they gonna stay together or wat?:don't really care much for Jou/Honda, but wat i really want to know is the info on Yami/Amelda!^_^:

Poor Mokuba!...13 and almost doing that crap with ESPA:shudder...sadistic bastard:-_- Jeez Mokuba's going through an emotional rollercoaster that every teen goes through...welcome to the TEEN DRAMA club! Poor Mokuba...does he get no lovin in any of the stories? Sahhh ne...atleast Bakura helped him at the right time and Mokuba atleast is being nice to him...getting married to Kaiba :P lol...

Dude when Honda, Yami, Jou, and Amelda got to the pool i seriously felt the tension and hostility there between the rest of the guys! Jeez they might as well start WWIII...in the pool of course :P

So when in the hell are we gonna see Otogi, Kaiba, and Dartz? I mean i no they got companies to run but they got to have some vacations and day offs to relax rite? :P Poor them work and no play. If i went through that cycle in my summer vacation I'd probably consider killing myself then and there XP...j/k!

BALLOONS! ^_^ I got and idea on wats gonna happen next and hopefully i'm right...T.T I become bummed when i get something wrong...BUT u know wat they say :expect the unexpected"...I think :P...

At the end of ur story I read the part which said that u weren't getting any more real reviews so I hope my review makes ya feel better :shrugs: who knows? So this is the conclusion of my review and I can't wait for the next chappie!^_^ UPdate as SOON as YOU can! Ja Ne!

P.s. I go to GaiaOnline too and I was wonderin wats ur sn there? Reply if ya want to...its optional:shrug:

Awww teh fight between Ryou and Bakura scared me, I was like NOOOOOOO don't be mad at each other, but they were but now they arn't anymore so its all good lol. I loved this chappie although I do feel desperatly sorry for Ryou, what the hell is Dartz up to? H ewnet to all that trouble and now deosn;t bother to contact Ryou argh men they will never ever make sense in any possible sense of the word. Lol Malik was so cute I loevd it when Marik was just like 'NO' to everything and how Malik ended up asking each of the yamis to stab each other at some point in the chappie. Lol love it love u Velvetina xx

Tired from my test, fuck logging in.

They're so British! It's hilarious! And you have some weird fetish with abusive relationships. I mean, damn.

Woot, Kaiba beach party! Ryou better cheer the fuck up, he's not fun depressed.

I dunno what else, I'mma go to bed soon... --le yawn-- Fucking history exams.

Love,
Miri

Hey Schwazie!! Keep up the good work (as ya always do) lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!