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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MOST AWSOME DUDE! loved it, have to admit every chappie I am getting mroe and more fond of Rapheal and Peggy, tehy are just too cute. And Go Raphy, he was proper molesting Peggy, not that he seemed to mind lol. The water fight was hysterical and the aftermath too just pure genious, to make it all the funnier my friends and I just finished a water fight almost identical to that one! Great fun ^__^ I have to admit though I still feel kinda sorry for Ryou, there was no excuse for Dartz to do what he did so he'd better aplogise soon or any warm fuzzy feelings I have for him may dissapear, btu not for this fic cos it rocks. Can't wait for an update soon Velvetina xx
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It'd be really weird if Malik and Otogi broke up (;_; Nuu!) and Mokuba fell for Malik...XD
Oohh, I loved ze Yami/Yugi ness! ^^ And the fight...XD That was awesome. ...*sniffles* I feel bad for Malik though...Otogi all wrapped up in his work...XP Meanie! ^^ But I'm glad Dartz went to see Ryou...he needed to...*throws Ryou plush at his head* o.o;
Oohh, I loved ze Yami/Yugi ness! ^^ And the fight...XD That was awesome. ...*sniffles* I feel bad for Malik though...Otogi all wrapped up in his work...XP Meanie! ^^ But I'm glad Dartz went to see Ryou...he needed to...*throws Ryou plush at his head* o.o;
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I say Mouba and Mako... never seen that before, But I still like m/J.... but hey your story you pick. I love how Yami actted in this.. I don't know why. But I like it, update soon, got to go later days
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No, I don't think this chapter was boring at all. I really liked it. To tell you the truth, I wasn't all too fond of the pairing Yugi/Marik, but you make it so natural it doesn't seem odd at all... actually, all your pairings work. :D (Looks like Mokuba's got a new role model! lol) I can't wait to find out what the deal is with those balloons next chapter! :D
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAY 2 GO!! Schwazie!!! You are amazing! keep going! YOU ROCK!!!
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woohoo!!! mokuba and mako, yes yes yes plz!! that would be totally original!! i'm glad malik and otogi are working it out; i like dartz's secretary ^^ she should do that more often! oh another cute hat to add to ryou's growing collection :D so rap is on top? and here i thought it was the other way around *snickers* i love this. lemons plz! but u know, um waht about hte others couples u haven't mentioned? like mai *snarls* (greatly despite her), anzu, um shizuka (bitch). jsut wondering what's going on wiht them. heh for a minute i though dartz bounght ryou another cat ^^ no another demonic kitty!!
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mm, that was nice. My bastard internet went out so I missed a chapter, but hey, what can you do? Man, that noob thing... some people just suck. I like this chapter, it was more light hearted than the two that came before it, which made me smile. As a personal perference I tend to steer toward the more light hearted fics that don't sink into endless angst. You've written very good sad and depressing things, and you don't drag them out forever, so you're stories are great for me.
I liked the little thing you put in about Amelda being sick of hearing about Yugi, it's one of those little things that makes a story better, and it made me wonder if there was going to be anything connected to that later on in the story. I'm very anxious to see them comfront Dartz, and see if he actually has an excuse for the way he's been acting or not. I still have to say that any Marik/Yugi time is my favorite, but the Ryou/Bakuraness in the other chapter was cute, and I love how depict yami/hikari relationships, it falls well into the fucked-up category.
It was also nice to see Bakura kicking someone's ass to watch out for Mokuba, to me, that speaks volumes about how commited his is to Seto. Since Yami's group and Yugi's group still aren't getting along, I'm also wondering if there'll end up being another fight between them, and as for Anzu, she didn't seem to serve any purpose, and her absence hadn't even been noticed by me until you mentioned it. The ending to the chapter was nice as well, and even if it seemed boring to you, I greatly enjoyed it, and it acted as something of a breather in the story. Can't wait to read more, as always! ^.^
I liked the little thing you put in about Amelda being sick of hearing about Yugi, it's one of those little things that makes a story better, and it made me wonder if there was going to be anything connected to that later on in the story. I'm very anxious to see them comfront Dartz, and see if he actually has an excuse for the way he's been acting or not. I still have to say that any Marik/Yugi time is my favorite, but the Ryou/Bakuraness in the other chapter was cute, and I love how depict yami/hikari relationships, it falls well into the fucked-up category.
It was also nice to see Bakura kicking someone's ass to watch out for Mokuba, to me, that speaks volumes about how commited his is to Seto. Since Yami's group and Yugi's group still aren't getting along, I'm also wondering if there'll end up being another fight between them, and as for Anzu, she didn't seem to serve any purpose, and her absence hadn't even been noticed by me until you mentioned it. The ending to the chapter was nice as well, and even if it seemed boring to you, I greatly enjoyed it, and it acted as something of a breather in the story. Can't wait to read more, as always! ^.^
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'll review my own fic because I often re read my chapters after I finish them. This chapter was boring and without excitememnt. I feel horrible for chopping off the lemons and I feel that my writing is tired.
Sorry for not updating so often, I was going to update around 12 lat night but I started talking to a friend of mine...
It's tired. I'll do my best to make it better nextt time. I promise.
Sorry for not updating so often, I was going to update around 12 lat night but I started talking to a friend of mine...
It's tired. I'll do my best to make it better nextt time. I promise.
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
god yes n00b's are assholes and u know, u did hte right thing. they are so not worth the time. man this chapter is... well i'm kinda confused. the last cahpte, is it before th pool party? was hasn't dartz at least called ryou? and man what a mean cat! i feel like some couples are gonna be breaking up here. and yami should get over it. so yugi and marik are a couple. point being? i really love ur fics though :) and ur on gaia too? coolness! i'll pm u later ^^
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank the Gods! I actually thought I was going to go insane until the next chappie being updated! T.T such a relief but it felt like forever till u updated! Sahh ne...so wat's up? You don't update as frequently as u usually do! T.T I think i missed a note or something...
^_^ So anyways back to the reviewing...I hella cracked up on the water fight :P especially at the end with how Jou, Ryou, Mokuba, and Yugi showed their victories...:P hehehehe...when Kaiba walked in to see the chaos i cracked then and there :P especially when Bakura soaked him at the crotch :P
Yippie! More ppl going to the beach trip/vacation!^_^
I demand to see more and longer lemons!...PPPLLLLLSSSSSS! T.T Your stopping at the REALLY GOOD parts and it makes me want to cry T.T -> :P -> ^_^
Sooo...with Mokuba as a single person now...weird suggestions with the Ryuzaki and Mako thing...I got to say Mako cuz ur rite about them going to see and it would be the perfect setting for Mokuba and Mako to meet :P! ^_^ Hope Mokuba finds love out there cuz EVERYONE gotta have some lovin at one point in their life cuz if they don't...EVERYONE WOULD BE A VIRGIN!...j/k i mean common human instincts tell us to mate and have sex and junk and if we didn't the world wouldn't go round...ok that was way off topic :P sorry ^_^
So anyways great chappie again and can't wait :and do I mean can't wait: for the next chappie! ^_^ UPdate soon
^_^ So anyways back to the reviewing...I hella cracked up on the water fight :P especially at the end with how Jou, Ryou, Mokuba, and Yugi showed their victories...:P hehehehe...when Kaiba walked in to see the chaos i cracked then and there :P especially when Bakura soaked him at the crotch :P
Yippie! More ppl going to the beach trip/vacation!^_^
I demand to see more and longer lemons!...PPPLLLLLSSSSSS! T.T Your stopping at the REALLY GOOD parts and it makes me want to cry T.T -> :P -> ^_^
Sooo...with Mokuba as a single person now...weird suggestions with the Ryuzaki and Mako thing...I got to say Mako cuz ur rite about them going to see and it would be the perfect setting for Mokuba and Mako to meet :P! ^_^ Hope Mokuba finds love out there cuz EVERYONE gotta have some lovin at one point in their life cuz if they don't...EVERYONE WOULD BE A VIRGIN!...j/k i mean common human instincts tell us to mate and have sex and junk and if we didn't the world wouldn't go round...ok that was way off topic :P sorry ^_^
So anyways great chappie again and can't wait :and do I mean can't wait: for the next chappie! ^_^ UPdate soon