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for White Sweethearts

by Kugatsu

person Velvetina
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOT! I LOVE IT I LOVE YOU I LOVE THE WORLD...well maybe not the world you but you and this peice of work I love!!! I'm hyper cos like you said summers here! *mwah* Lol poor Kaiba's sore...mmm the day him and Bakura must have had *drools* and I loved teh reverse psychology thing at the end. You are a genious
*bows down* we are totally not worthy of you. lol Fluffy bunnies is the most evil game on this planet! I hate marshmellows and my friends made me play that game, i like swallowed four at one time, and they were big too! I was coughing for hours. Hehehe the image of Rapheal (gotta learn how to spell) posing for Peggy was too cute but once again the angst surrounding taht pair almost broke my heart, but I adore it so all is good....as ever it was wonderful. Love it! Velvetina xxx
person BlacKat
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another GREAT:and do i mean great: story!^_^ stuffing marshmellows without chocking on them and dieing? That happens in the real world but when it deals with anime...only in anime-_-. I totally lol when Ryou, Dartz, Otogi, and Malik got caught in the batheroom :P :heheheheheehe...: sahhh I got a question! Out of every on in the group...IS VARON THE ONLY STRAIGHT GUY AROUND THERE! XP that's just plain wrong...gahhh whatever.
So anyways great stories keep them up and i can't wait for the next one!^_^CYA!
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AND YA DO IT AGAIN!!! Schwazi!! GOOD ON YA!!!! LMAO!!
person Rachel Dracon
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I'm sure I'll end up calling everyone bastards now. Oh well, at least anyone who knows me knows not to take offense. Man, we should have a holiday like that in the US, it seems only fair. Can't even imagine being caught by a school principal in the bathroom doing that, though I cracked up when Otogi fainted. Ryou blowing Dartz was interesting too, seems he's still turned on by what his yami used to say. Yugi's funny too: "You're so British." The section on Raph and Pegasus was interesting, is there eventually gonna be a fic where he comes to visit Pegasus? Either way, it was great! ^.^