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for Final Distance

by ShadowDragon

person Anon
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like this tory keep on typing i want to read more.
person Ezj-Key
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is the best YU-GI-Oh fanfic I've read.
I would so looove to read more. You're writing is
just addicting and the storys hilarius.
Please update ^_^'''
person lonelydove
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story...please update?? ^_^
person Iyasu
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is too hilarious! I love it still though. Must be 'cause I'm from Georgia. Update soon! ^^
person YamiRynEnjeru
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
x.x I apologize a tenfold for not reviewing your chapters as you post them, but I promise you that I read them all and enjoy every one muchly *hearts* And I mean that for all your fics that I'm following, each is written so well with its own characteristic and life that I'm always amazed one person could have written them all =D Mwuah!

This was very cute X3 And not the intense sort of cute, but a evenly coated kind that tugs you along to find out just what the boys are up to next. For a moment I thought Seto would over react when he found Yami & Bakura, but the make up kiss was all good XD Now, of course, we must see how Malik & Bakura get drawn to each other, but with Atemu flinching and such at the end there... I'm not sure what to expect X3;; *wriggles*

As always, well written ^^ This is splendid work and I can't apologize enough for not managing to keep up with it on the reviewing end x.x

*much love*
~YRE

person Funmi
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Horray!!! Well that was faster than usual or I just read these stories at the right time. I am so in love with this story but I thought the Atemu/Malik date would last longer. I liked how Seto got some his come uppin's for teasing his brother Seth so much. I bet Atemu would realize how much he likes Atemu if Seth was dating someone else. I think Atemu is possessive type too and thats why Seth and Atemu are so compatible too.
person Funmi
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
There is no way audible I can express my deepest delites in the continuation of the this story. I am really happy about the way the story is playing out and I still love the OC version of Malik. If my scanner wasn't busted, I would draw a picture or three of scenes in this story. I'm kinda sad though that Atemu doesn't feel anything towards Seth. Poor Seth.
person YamiRynEnjeru
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*giggle* Bwuah, so amusing, I have to remember not to read this fic while in class, I can't help but grin and giggle. All for good reason, of course, the bickering the twins are going through is just so fun, and typical, which makes this all the more realistic and lovable.
Aw, Burbujas is too cute for proper and coherent words *hearts* I hope Bakura doesn't go around hurting him further, as unintentional as it was ^^ And Yami's cute too, as rare as it is for me to admit such XD
Very well done! *hearts*
person YamiRynEnjeru
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
=3 I'm stalking you, yes. XD;;

All for good reason, your writing is addicting. This fic is emotionally opposite to the Colors fics, but I'm certainly not complaining. The humor and detail you place into the fic is just great, I find myself laughing and having to pause a moment before being able to continue. I've fallen in love with the idea of Yami & Atemu speaking Spanish, considering I can fully appreciate what they're saying, unlike when authors use more Japanese or Arabic than I know, I find that characteristic amusing and original.

Well done ^^ I look forward to how this fic shall progress, just like your other work.
Excellent job! *adores*
~YRE
person spidy007
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story so far, i really like the idea of Yami being a twin. its kool! update soon!