rate_review Reviews

it's great so far! Please continue.

woooooot omg, omg, this is a sad love story, aww, continue, i lurf malik and marik to death. XD SMOOCHES!

How Sexy would that taco have tasted? Marik seems to be spending a lot of time thinking about food. Very nice, the fic is still going strong. I also so like your creativity, it really adds to the story. Anywho, random snakes and fast food aside, I look foreard to reading the next chapter.

By the gods I've missed reading your stuff. You are the sex, girlfriend. Can't wait for the next update.

Did someone say something about gratuitous Ryou/Bakura action? If so, I'm in. Heh. I like how you portray Ryou, you give him a spine, which many people seem to forget he has. Sweet and innocent little boys don't chase their friends around with their fresh bleeding wounds asking them if "They want to touch it", nor do they torment said friend with their occult deck when they know said friend is terrified of zombies, demons, and other things of the occult nature. Ryou's such an evil little bastard sometimes. He just does everything with such a sweet smile that people can't help but forgive him.(Seriously, I don't know what's up with Ryou and tormenting Jou. Then again, everyone torments Jou sooner or later.)

And the moral of the story is "Don't Whore Around On Your Wedding Day Or Your Husband Will Be Bitten By A Random Snake And Die". *Lol* The story is a little bit fast pase for my tastes, but I enjoyed it anyway. Whee, and your adding B/R to the fic too? Sweet. I look forward to the rest.

Huh? what happened to the rest?

wow, this is amazing!
at first I thought 'oh no, not one of these stories where Marik is a slut...' but it was really worth reading! The effort Marik puts in rescuing Malik is very, very, very very cute x3
I hope he'll make it. (I am sure he will xD and he'll surely get a nice remuneration *snicker*)
your style is very nice, it is easy to follow but not too simple, your choice of words is nice :D
aaand I love Marik and Malik together and I think Marik got more than he deserved, and Malik surely did never deserve to die! ;__;
(I love it when they fight... I love the fight, and I love the propitiation, and as Marik and Malik didn't have the chance to propitiate, they should get a new chance o.o)
arrr, please continue I want to know what happens to them xD
(Bakura and Ryou are not my fandom, but as long as it helps getting Marik and Malik together again I deal with everything XD)

Hey, I love your story 'Don't Look Back', I'd love it if you updated since my fav pairing is Malik/Marik ^_^ Keep up the good work =)

That was the best!!!!!! I loved it so much I can't wait till you make the ending! PPPPPLLLLLLEEEEEAAAAASSSSSEEEE make the ending really good, and don't take long making it so I can red it. I know I'm probably nobody to you but you should make a sequal or something with Malik comeing home so happy and sees Marik and Bakura together. Then, Marik has to save Malik and make up or Malik moght do something (ex. kill himself) WWWWWWEEEEEEEELLLLLL, love the story so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!