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for Unexpected Consequences

by NihilEtNemo

person kurisushichan
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I Loved this, you have to continue!!!
person Lana
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was really good... though a little too kinky in some parts for my taste... still good though... I hope you update...
person Amber
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that wuz a touchful/hot story cant believe poor kaiba got raped! anyways sinse you are such an ausome story writter and sinse I'am a big fan of Yaoi I mean a REALLY big fan! could you maybe possibly think about writing a Threesome like maybe with DukexTristainxjoey all of them are sooooo Hot and it's compleatly up 2 u so thats if u want but sinse school is almost starting i just want to read a really hot story before i go back PLEASE PLEASE!! by :)
person Anon
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh yah!!! it continues... i was a bit sad at the end, but i can't wait for more!
person bluesun
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice this is getting very intresting
person fan
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O ....M ....efing GOD that ...was ....hot not only was Seto uke THIS FIC WAS TOOOOO CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTE :3 omg!!!!YOU BLOODY WRITE MORE BABE I LOVE your stuff!!!!XD <3<3 marry me !!

please update soon more more uke seto fics!!

___faith
person TrunkZy
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwww!! That was sooooo cute! Not really angsty. Heck I was wondering what Joey told him through the whole story ;) nice one!
Ja Ne TrunkZy the Mighty
person yaoi girl
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fucking shit!!!, sorry usualli dont use that word but....but well i can´t think in eny other word, men, that was...wuau, first that allmost make my cry, for the humiliation to seto, i love him (but i loved more se him like uke) enyway, then with joe acting like that ,soo kind whith him and him enjoyin at the end well all get better , much better. please don´t let this fic there.

but i have one question, how the hell will seto face the yamis later, you know every one of thems see him.
person nicky
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooohhhh, this was gooooood!

I was glad to see that, after you warned us about humiliation and all, Joey didn't take any pleasure out of that particular part but, on the contrary, tried to make it as good for Seto as possible.

And the promise that we don't get to hear until the very end of the story was quite a nice touch not to mention the kiss ^-^

person Death over Time (not signed in)
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi my challenge-maker! Felt like reading some of your stuff... this was hot, really, really, really, hot. You rock major!

Seto is so amazingly fucking hot, I know you agree with me on that... I would seriously spend my life savings (1,345,000 last time I checked) to see Seto Kaiba being major submissive or... major dominant. Seto + leather + whip = 18 gallons of fangirl saliva, ya know

I'm a huge puppy and pride shipper by the way, so I love you more then I did before.