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for Unexpected Consequences

by NihilEtNemo

person Ayeshagirl
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I feel sorry for Seto... his first game of truth or dare and he got dared to do that... ouch... Jou really needs to stop pushing his luck
person Anon
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
person Morghann
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*scratches head* Jou is really stupid in this one, isn't he? And the whole scene in the first chapter was very disturbing. Even Yugi didn't make a particularly strong effort in stopping what was happening. Neither did Jou. (Majority rules? That had to be the most moronic thing he said that nght.) I really liked it when Seto blew them all off and I hope there will be one more scene like that (like, say, rubbing Yugi's so-called hand friendship in the dirt. What happened really wasn't friendly).

And the dinner was very well done. I think Jou does deserve a bit more of a wake-up call, that it's going to take a lot more effort than what he's currently giving. Since money is never going to impress Seto, how about a little more sincerity? I think that's what Jou's lacking. He doesn't really seem sorry.
person Dragon Kiana
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O OH....MY.....GOD!!! Joey did not just say that? *gasping* oh hell is going to break loose now. After that incident, lets see how our pooch is going to make it up to Seto now. Love the story, you must continue.
person Velvetina
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY you updated this fic!!! It seems to have taken ages and I really really love it!! *shakes head* Oh dear Jou really should just try to think before he speaks, personally if I was Seto I'd say 'screw the deal you litttle *********' Lol but if Seto did that we wouldn't have a fic. Pretty Please update this one quicker next time because I really do think its great.

Velvetina xx
person Anon
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hot, creepy weird mix.
person Anon
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue^.^
person Anon
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A good, & hot, story, no doubt about it. However, you got Marik & Malik mixed up. Marik's the yami, Malik's the hikari.
person Velvetina
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are you gonna update this? I hope so because its awsome. I feel so sorry for Seto! And if I could get my hands on those lads i would kill them all despite how much I adore them because Seto is my fave. Grr silly group. But very well written so go u
person I love this one
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice are you planning on adding on?