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You should make seto and joey do things to each other...like they did in the irst chapter...


Wow...no one really ever makes seto smoke but with the amount of pressure ut on him all the time..he should...

I must say that was one of the most fabulous stories I have ever gotten he pleasure of reading. You must do a sequel or something, come on please. I would faint if you did. I just *shivers excitedly* I would love reading it. This was very well written, the contrast of the whole plot. And what I loved about it, you kept them in character throughout most of the story. I also love the thing with the other characters threatening Seto with a knife in sorts. I really am bad aren’t I? Anyways, I am looking forward to reading more stories you have created. Please think about the sequel, I would love to read it. :)

i like the story and pairings, but the finish seems to rush. Wathever, please continue your other stories.

I read you soon. (I'll hope)

I really like your story, it was very interesting and exciting. I especially liked when Jou took Seto to the club. That was a good chapter.
Hope you keep writing and please update your other stories.

Amazing fic, beautifully written and ignore the reviewer above me, we don't want angst all of the time. They suck. This fic however was wonderful. The image of Seto in that torn silk shirt and leather straps and pants was enough to make this fangirl drool.

By the way I was wondering if you would be interested in posting in a couple of groups that I belong to. I think you and your wonderful work would fit right in. If interested email me at Kittenbelle@hotmail.com and I'll tell you more.

Again a great fic and I'm deffers gonna re-read it!

oh yes! thank you setosgirl!!! i've been waiting for this story to be finished forever ^_^ but man, that's cutting it close o_O i wasn't even sure if seto would end up forgiving jou.. but i'm happy for the happy ending ^_^ can't wait for your other stories as well! good luck

This sucks! you just totally ruined the fic by adding that going to dinner thing...you should have nade it more angsty, it would have been a lot better! You should make up for it in the later chapters, I liked the first chapter though, it was..nice

Update soon ^_^

Kyahaha, poor Joey! All that expensive wine in his face!

*snickers* This fic really apeals to my sadistic side! I really love it! Cookies nad pocky for you! And I'll give you yamyams if you update soon! ^_^