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for Unexpected Consequences

by NihilEtNemo

schedule June 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. Okay, judging from the previous reviews, I guess I'm a boring and stiff person because I didn't enjoy that. AT. ALL. I just sat with a mild nauseous feeling, and couldn't finish the fic. I'm sorry if I offended you, we all have personal tastes, and maybe I shouldn't even be writing this because there's nothing even resembling contructive critism in this review, but I can't let it be.. This is not a flame, I just had to, for one of the only times in my life, leave a negative review on this, because it REALLY made my stomach feel queasy. You write well, but the context.. yeah.. Sorry.
person jin1377
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwww
person jin1377
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good answer on that truth!!!! but i don't think bakura is that bad...(smirk) is he?
person jin1377
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mmmmmmmmmm love lemnos!!!!!! 1st and it's a great start!!!!! i wander what's gonna happen!!!!! bye!!!!
person jin1377
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(giggle) i wander how joey's gonna convince kaiba in 3 dates. i know< kaiba likes him but...dunno just gonna read the rest and review at the last chap if i feel for it...bye!!!
person jin1377
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok. maybe not at the last chap but this was good!!!! heheheh first chance's a gonar joey!!!! keep things up!!!! chow!
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No more? Awwwwwwww. I was looking forward to the game continuing or maybe another lemon. *cries in darkened room* Great story btw ^_^ I think i'm going to read ALL of your stories. Good plan?
person Lucky Thirteen
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this! You should defenitly make a segual to this.
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is a fantastic story i love the fact that Joey has to earn Seto's love
Kitty ^xx^
person Rosebud
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! I really enjoyed reading it!